8/1/2011 c10 6Trickster707
I just read your story and I have to say I am really enjoying it. We usually get stories like these only from Denise's POV, if you get what I mean. I nice to see something different!
Please update soon!
I just read your story and I have to say I am really enjoying it. We usually get stories like these only from Denise's POV, if you get what I mean. I nice to see something different!
Please update soon!
8/1/2010 c9 Kozumi
Oh hell I love this chapter. I loved every chapter you've written and this one of course, is the same. It was a bit short though but a short update is better than no update. One should not be greedy. Or at least too greedy =P
I've got to say, Vic's attitude and emotional problem was awesome at the start but it seems a bit excessive at times. Hopefully, you didn't find that offensive. It's just that, when ever I think of Vic I can only imagine a raging one. I'm pretty sure even if they're vampires they have more than one characteristic in their personality right? Even if it's in the form of flashbacks, I'm curious to see what it was that Xavier liked about her in the past. What was it about her that made him go so far for her. And of course, vice versa. What was it about Xavier that made HER go so far. But that's just my ranting.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh hell I love this chapter. I loved every chapter you've written and this one of course, is the same. It was a bit short though but a short update is better than no update. One should not be greedy. Or at least too greedy =P
I've got to say, Vic's attitude and emotional problem was awesome at the start but it seems a bit excessive at times. Hopefully, you didn't find that offensive. It's just that, when ever I think of Vic I can only imagine a raging one. I'm pretty sure even if they're vampires they have more than one characteristic in their personality right? Even if it's in the form of flashbacks, I'm curious to see what it was that Xavier liked about her in the past. What was it about her that made him go so far for her. And of course, vice versa. What was it about Xavier that made HER go so far. But that's just my ranting.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
7/15/2010 c8 Kozumi
Oh man I can't wait to see/read his face when he finds out that Sheila is his child. Man it'd be the most amusing thing in the world. *Is imagining it already and smiling like crazy*
Gage was cool. But now he's not. A mean Gage is...not cool. Un-Uncoolify him pretty please. But I'm sure he's being like this for a reason. *i.e ignore my petty request =P*
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh man I can't wait to see/read his face when he finds out that Sheila is his child. Man it'd be the most amusing thing in the world. *Is imagining it already and smiling like crazy*
Gage was cool. But now he's not. A mean Gage is...not cool. Un-Uncoolify him pretty please. But I'm sure he's being like this for a reason. *i.e ignore my petty request =P*
Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/8/2010 c7 Kozumi
OMG, I can't even type properly now. It was so so so awesome. I'm sorry I'm only spam reviewing. Can't wait til Victoria gets stronger! Xavier needs his ass kicked again!
OMG, I can't even type properly now. It was so so so awesome. I'm sorry I'm only spam reviewing. Can't wait til Victoria gets stronger! Xavier needs his ass kicked again!
3/6/2010 c6 Kozumi
Thank You for updating. Love you for it. And omg, this chapter is just pure awesome-ness. And I'm sorry if my previous review made you guilty. Didn't mean to (not really =P). LOL. Looking forward to your next update, no pressure.
Thank You for updating. Love you for it. And omg, this chapter is just pure awesome-ness. And I'm sorry if my previous review made you guilty. Didn't mean to (not really =P). LOL. Looking forward to your next update, no pressure.
3/5/2010 c6 Crystal
GREAT STORY! UPDATE MORE OFTEN! XD
GREAT STORY! UPDATE MORE OFTEN! XD
11/13/2009 c5 Kozumi
I've waited for so long...thank you for updating! I love you! Although I think you need to reread some parts...I think you typed in a few mistakes. Like at the start...'she sleeps… I took in all in, ' Is the first 'in' supposed to be 'it'? Anyways, I know you just updated not long ago, but humans are greedy people so, I pray that the next chapter is on its way?
I've waited for so long...thank you for updating! I love you! Although I think you need to reread some parts...I think you typed in a few mistakes. Like at the start...'she sleeps… I took in all in, ' Is the first 'in' supposed to be 'it'? Anyways, I know you just updated not long ago, but humans are greedy people so, I pray that the next chapter is on its way?
11/13/2009 c5 2Mae Liz
Well, that's interesting. Given back his powers. I can't wait to see how much damage and destruction he creates.
Well, that's interesting. Given back his powers. I can't wait to see how much damage and destruction he creates.
9/2/2009 c4 Mae Liz
I'm interested in what is going on with the politics and everything that is slowly adding! It took me a while to read and respond, but life has been crazy! Hurry and continue this story!
I'm interested in what is going on with the politics and everything that is slowly adding! It took me a while to read and respond, but life has been crazy! Hurry and continue this story!
8/2/2009 c4 2Howl's Faith
I like Gage. He and Vic makes me smile. Good story so far, keep writing please!
I like Gage. He and Vic makes me smile. Good story so far, keep writing please!
8/1/2009 c4 2Ray-Anne
I love it how after a long time of an update I can still remember the story without having to read back because it was that good. This opened up the new twist you've created well and is just as smooth as before with her...well lack of better term 'insanity' as descriptively written.
I love it how after a long time of an update I can still remember the story without having to read back because it was that good. This opened up the new twist you've created well and is just as smooth as before with her...well lack of better term 'insanity' as descriptively written.
5/21/2009 c3 Kozumi
Did I ever mention that I love this story to bits?
Well, I do. I really really do. I think it's weird but I wanna be more like Victoria. At least she knows what she wants. I hope you update soon.
Did I ever mention that I love this story to bits?
Well, I do. I really really do. I think it's weird but I wanna be more like Victoria. At least she knows what she wants. I hope you update soon.
3/12/2009 c3 Ray-Anne
Does he know he has a child? Oh my...That was extremely shock factor. Beautifully done.
Does he know he has a child? Oh my...That was extremely shock factor. Beautifully done.