for Chasing After a Rainbow5/1/2009 c1 
2Sarthim
Very nice. I think that might be my favorite of yours so far. It was a pleasure to read all of your poems, and good luck in the future.
2SarthimVery nice. I think that might be my favorite of yours so far. It was a pleasure to read all of your poems, and good luck in the future.
4/4/2009 c1 8beadlety
I really like the concept of this poem :) And I haven't read a sonnet in a really long time. What inspired you to write one? I also like the descriptors like "velvet drape" and "bare feet, loose hair."
All in all a really good sonnet!
8beadletyI really like the concept of this poem :) And I haven't read a sonnet in a really long time. What inspired you to write one? I also like the descriptors like "velvet drape" and "bare feet, loose hair."
All in all a really good sonnet!
3/29/2009 c1 HalfBloodPrincess
Oh i like this one too! Fabulous! My favourite line was 'I am Abandoned by reality' Truly amazing.
bella
Oh i like this one too! Fabulous! My favourite line was 'I am Abandoned by reality' Truly amazing.
bella
3/28/2009 c1 43Dante's Disciple
Don't see many sonnets on here and yours is very good all the rhymes work well together, quite a tragic story too, I like it :)
43Dante's DiscipleDon't see many sonnets on here and yours is very good all the rhymes work well together, quite a tragic story too, I like it :)
2/26/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
This is really unique. I really like it. Nice work of art you have here!
138lael1bolognaThis is really unique. I really like it. Nice work of art you have here!