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8/23/2009 c1 115Remera
I like it, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work!
5/8/2009 c1 Amarisu
Very nice poem. It's short, but I think it conveys a lot.
5/1/2009 c1 2Sarthim
Very nice. I think that might be my favorite of yours so far. It was a pleasure to read all of your poems, and good luck in the future.
4/4/2009 c1 8beadlety
I really like the concept of this poem :) And I haven't read a sonnet in a really long time. What inspired you to write one? I also like the descriptors like "velvet drape" and "bare feet, loose hair."

All in all a really good sonnet!
3/29/2009 c1 HalfBloodPrincess
Oh i like this one too! Fabulous! My favourite line was 'I am Abandoned by reality' Truly amazing.

3/28/2009 c1 43Dante's Disciple
Don't see many sonnets on here and yours is very good all the rhymes work well together, quite a tragic story too, I like it :)
2/26/2009 c1 15Mom's Mistake
This is truly beautiful and poetic. Please continue to write and post.
2/26/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
This is really unique. I really like it. Nice work of art you have here!

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