2/26/2009 c1 45AStrangerToYou
It's really good! And hey, I can't write within a structure at all... so well done. =)
I don't think you need to say "a lot more better" at the end. "A lot better" would probably do. Just a suggestion.
I like the title as well. Not sure why. But nice work =)
It's really good! And hey, I can't write within a structure at all... so well done. =)
I don't think you need to say "a lot more better" at the end. "A lot better" would probably do. Just a suggestion.
I like the title as well. Not sure why. But nice work =)