for In My Eyes2/27/2010 c1 
4firefly114
Oh, nice first chapter! I like how Alexis wasn't all rich and snobby-well she was rich, but without the snobby. My only suggestion is that maybe you could have let the readers know she was rich and pretty in another way besides her telling us, it makes her seem a little self-centered...i mean, just having the popular pretty girls ask her to be friends is enough. but it's just a suggestion, nice chapter!
4firefly114Oh, nice first chapter! I like how Alexis wasn't all rich and snobby-well she was rich, but without the snobby. My only suggestion is that maybe you could have let the readers know she was rich and pretty in another way besides her telling us, it makes her seem a little self-centered...i mean, just having the popular pretty girls ask her to be friends is enough. but it's just a suggestion, nice chapter!
3/2/2009 c1 1SkyBlueAngel
this is a really good start for a story like this!
i can't wait to read more.
update soon!
1SkyBlueAngelthis is a really good start for a story like this!
i can't wait to read more.
update soon!