
3/9/2010 c1 Rilan Morr
i love this, really. it's really good. the title matches ir perfectly. i know you've probably known this already, of course. i mean, its your poem, duh? why wouldn't you, you came up with it? hahahah, i'm babbling, and probably making no sense whatsoever :) good piece.
i love this, really. it's really good. the title matches ir perfectly. i know you've probably known this already, of course. i mean, its your poem, duh? why wouldn't you, you came up with it? hahahah, i'm babbling, and probably making no sense whatsoever :) good piece.
2/15/2010 c1
4AdDiCtEd2wRiTiNg13
Dang. You just captured the how most people all in all of itself. So good.

Dang. You just captured the how most people all in all of itself. So good.
5/2/2009 c1
53writer1211
this was awsome, it awoke me from my half sleeping state. Do you write both potry and fiction ?

this was awsome, it awoke me from my half sleeping state. Do you write both potry and fiction ?
5/1/2009 c1
165RandomUser674
That was really thought-provoking. It's exactly true, how most people hide behind lies. Love the title. Awesome poem.

That was really thought-provoking. It's exactly true, how most people hide behind lies. Love the title. Awesome poem.
3/5/2009 c1 maddie 3
ha ha body twin, you sounded surprised:P and mika, you are an exceptional writer, you should try and publish something!
ha ha body twin, you sounded surprised:P and mika, you are an exceptional writer, you should try and publish something!