for eighth grade4/30/2009 c1 
145young and the reckless
there are so many quote-able phrases in here, it's lovely!
"the emotional intensity of a tubesock" ...hilarious!
"(perfect sensitive gentlemen?- or maybe
filthy opportunists with wandering hands)" ...so true!
"(if ignorance is bliss then they must be orgasmic)" ...fantastic! :D
this is such a clever, witty piece. great job!
keep writing!
145young and the recklessthere are so many quote-able phrases in here, it's lovely!
"the emotional intensity of a tubesock" ...hilarious!
"(perfect sensitive gentlemen?- or maybe
filthy opportunists with wandering hands)" ...so true!
"(if ignorance is bliss then they must be orgasmic)" ...fantastic! :D
this is such a clever, witty piece. great job!
keep writing!
4/25/2009 c1 19Ihni
Aw, that was cute and true and adorable and funny and a bit bitter and made me smile. I liked it :)
19IhniAw, that was cute and true and adorable and funny and a bit bitter and made me smile. I liked it :)
3/24/2009 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This is marvelous, and so true. Being a "boy", I can understand the perspective and the generalized stupidity that we often portray, especially in our younger years, though not exclusively for some. The end line really made the whole work so much more humorous. Truth and humor, a great combination that is truly exemplified here. I'm going to put this on my favorites, as it deserves to be read by anyone, everyone, who ever really experienced "eighth grade". Great write. MD:77.
879Moondog DozierThis is marvelous, and so true. Being a "boy", I can understand the perspective and the generalized stupidity that we often portray, especially in our younger years, though not exclusively for some. The end line really made the whole work so much more humorous. Truth and humor, a great combination that is truly exemplified here. I'm going to put this on my favorites, as it deserves to be read by anyone, everyone, who ever really experienced "eighth grade". Great write. MD:77.