
3/8/2009 c2
6lexaxo
James sounds hot.
Woah, so does Brad.
I like Craig, for some odd reason.
Lisa? She seems like a sweetheart.
Poor thing is going to have her heart broken.
Great Chapter.
UDPATE.

James sounds hot.
Woah, so does Brad.
I like Craig, for some odd reason.
Lisa? She seems like a sweetheart.
Poor thing is going to have her heart broken.
Great Chapter.
UDPATE.
3/6/2009 c2 taylor
love the second chapter, update again im hooked!
love the second chapter, update again im hooked!
3/6/2009 c2
6Rosetiger13
good content wise, but i would seriously think about reading it through for grammar and spelling,
happy writing
rosetiger13

good content wise, but i would seriously think about reading it through for grammar and spelling,
happy writing
rosetiger13
3/2/2009 c1
4Yuura
Aha...hmm...now this is interesting. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Update soon. (:

Aha...hmm...now this is interesting. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Update soon. (:
3/2/2009 c1 Taylor
love the story, i am really intrested in seeing where it is going!
keep up the good work and update soon please
love the story, i am really intrested in seeing where it is going!
keep up the good work and update soon please
2/28/2009 c1
20xxTunstall Chickxx
Seems like it'll be a good read, I'd say to watch your spelling though, I saw quite a few mistakes i tis chapter. UPDATE SOON! Nicely done.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx

Seems like it'll be a good read, I'd say to watch your spelling though, I saw quite a few mistakes i tis chapter. UPDATE SOON! Nicely done.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx