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5/3/2009 c1 21VioletSkye-x
i think you should get bored in spanish more often , this is freaking amazing ,... i adore it .
3/22/2009 c1 3AquaRose147
haha nice

its got an amazing flow

and your writing seems artistic...ly beautiful

well, at least you spend spanish class

...slightly productivly :D

no worries

i write during math

Cheers,

Evanescence147
3/9/2009 c1 muna
omg...this is wounderfull keep writting its very good
3/2/2009 c1 criti-sized
This was a really nice piece. The narration in it was great and the way that it rhymed was interesting. I liked how it told a story in a beckoning sort of way.

C.S.
2/28/2009 c1 20Lonzo
I have been waiting for something new to read... And I's got somesin! Suh-wet. Very nice, for being written in a very boring class, anyway...
2/28/2009 c1 132mizu no kokoro
eerie. good job on the rhyming.

keep writing

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