
5/3/2009 c1
21VioletSkye-x
i think you should get bored in spanish more often , this is freaking amazing ,... i adore it .

i think you should get bored in spanish more often , this is freaking amazing ,... i adore it .
3/22/2009 c1
3AquaRose147
haha nice
its got an amazing flow
and your writing seems artistic...ly beautiful
well, at least you spend spanish class
...slightly productivly :D
no worries
i write during math
Cheers,
Evanescence147

haha nice
its got an amazing flow
and your writing seems artistic...ly beautiful
well, at least you spend spanish class
...slightly productivly :D
no worries
i write during math
Cheers,
Evanescence147
3/9/2009 c1 muna
omg...this is wounderfull keep writting its very good
omg...this is wounderfull keep writting its very good
3/2/2009 c1 criti-sized
This was a really nice piece. The narration in it was great and the way that it rhymed was interesting. I liked how it told a story in a beckoning sort of way.
C.S.
This was a really nice piece. The narration in it was great and the way that it rhymed was interesting. I liked how it told a story in a beckoning sort of way.
C.S.