for What's another year?5/20/2009 c1 
4Isidris Gry
Poor guy! I know just how he feels; I still haven't had my first kiss or had a serious relationship. I agree with pencil sketch, it's really not easy. He really needs someone, it sounds like, and not someone like any of those horrible people.
As for this kid, what hobbies does he have? What are his interests? People are more likely to develop a romantic relationship if they are around each other a lot, so he should join a club or something, cause' then he'd have something in common with the other person. I'd like to see where you go with this :)
4Isidris GryPoor guy! I know just how he feels; I still haven't had my first kiss or had a serious relationship. I agree with pencil sketch, it's really not easy. He really needs someone, it sounds like, and not someone like any of those horrible people.
As for this kid, what hobbies does he have? What are his interests? People are more likely to develop a romantic relationship if they are around each other a lot, so he should join a club or something, cause' then he'd have something in common with the other person. I'd like to see where you go with this :)
3/2/2009 c1 12Kurohane Shizumi
Wait... is the main character a boy or girl? O_o; I can't tell.
XDD I'm 18 (19 in June) but I still haven't been kissed or had a relationship past 3 months.
I can TOTALLY relate to the character in that regard but who the person is is very... not there. :/ There is no focus on WHY these people like him/her and WHY s/he doesn't like them.
I hope this character gets developed more. I would definitely like to see where you go with this.
~Shizu ^_^
12Kurohane ShizumiWait... is the main character a boy or girl? O_o; I can't tell.
XDD I'm 18 (19 in June) but I still haven't been kissed or had a relationship past 3 months.
I can TOTALLY relate to the character in that regard but who the person is is very... not there. :/ There is no focus on WHY these people like him/her and WHY s/he doesn't like them.
I hope this character gets developed more. I would definitely like to see where you go with this.
~Shizu ^_^
3/2/2009 c1 8PencilSketchS
I don't know if I should review this or not, but my though is that no one else can judge someone else on their lovelife or lack thereof. Finding the love of your life is not easy.
8PencilSketchSI don't know if I should review this or not, but my though is that no one else can judge someone else on their lovelife or lack thereof. Finding the love of your life is not easy.