for One Word12/20/2009 c5 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Huh.
Thats really clever.
Actual.
It reminded me of this book I was reading not that long ago... But not. I really like what you've done.
Its witty and clever :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsHuh.
Thats really clever.
Actual.
It reminded me of this book I was reading not that long ago... But not. I really like what you've done.
Its witty and clever :)
12/20/2009 c4 HighOnBrokenWings
Awesome metaphor.
I love that last line. It made me laugh :D
And the thing is, it fits the whole thing :)
AWESOME!
Awesome metaphor.
I love that last line. It made me laugh :D
And the thing is, it fits the whole thing :)
AWESOME!
12/20/2009 c1 HighOnBrokenWings
Hah.
That's really clever.
I love the idea, thought the formattings a little peculiar... Especially for the way its written... Still. Really cool.
Hah.
That's really clever.
I love the idea, thought the formattings a little peculiar... Especially for the way its written... Still. Really cool.
5/24/2009 c3 LetYourImaginationSoar
These are hilariously funny, so, I am surprised that the one review only addressed the first chapter, because the second chapter is even funnier! But the first chapter, I do have to say, is excellent, just the same. Ha ha... specially the chapter titled pickett.
These are hilariously funny, so, I am surprised that the one review only addressed the first chapter, because the second chapter is even funnier! But the first chapter, I do have to say, is excellent, just the same. Ha ha... specially the chapter titled pickett.
4/1/2009 c1 6Kalista Jia
omg very original idea.
spaces. the spaces between each word are so important. with out them everythingwouldruntogether. we're use to putting them into our text. is that why the space between you and me has gotten so big. your just use to the distance? spaces.
I am speechless. It is truly amazing. Like the "everythingwouldruntogether" it is very cute. Excellent.
6Kalista Jiaomg very original idea.
spaces. the spaces between each word are so important. with out them everythingwouldruntogether. we're use to putting them into our text. is that why the space between you and me has gotten so big. your just use to the distance? spaces.
I am speechless. It is truly amazing. Like the "everythingwouldruntogether" it is very cute. Excellent.