for The Story You Shouldn't Know11/25/2010 c31 jessiblaze7
So it took me two whole days to read this story and I just want to say it's absolutely AMAZING. I'm not gonna lie, I even cried a few times! xP
So it took me two whole days to read this story and I just want to say it's absolutely AMAZING. I'm not gonna lie, I even cried a few times! xP
11/11/2010 c31 Last Wish
Your story is great! I loved it and I somehow happened to stumble across it and lets just say I'm quite happy I did. On another note, (which is my only complaint)I never pictured the devil's name to be Josh. I was picturing something more sinister, while "Joshua" sounds so ordinary...
Your story is great! I loved it and I somehow happened to stumble across it and lets just say I'm quite happy I did. On another note, (which is my only complaint)I never pictured the devil's name to be Josh. I was picturing something more sinister, while "Joshua" sounds so ordinary...
11/6/2010 c31 AudreyKW
you ned to get this published somehow. it was bloody amazing. wow. just wow. so believable. it actually got to the point where i even question the little faith i have :\
you ned to get this published somehow. it was bloody amazing. wow. just wow. so believable. it actually got to the point where i even question the little faith i have :\
10/21/2010 c2 
17clarity-eatworld
Oh, poor Mary. I'd be bloody annoyed if my name rhymed, LOL. ... Although, I like her power. Wish she could make people float. "Wingardium Leviosa!" (/Hides HP Fan]
Couldn't Anna have, you know, hidden her power a bit? I know she was like, showing it for what it was, but now everyone dislikes her. :(
Ana, thou fool! We're /all/ jealous. Sigh.
iLOL at her first meeting with Josh. If only she knew the drama, eh? xD
Ah, love the ending. Like, "First I'll kill her and - damn, I'm peckish ..."
17clarity-eatworldOh, poor Mary. I'd be bloody annoyed if my name rhymed, LOL. ... Although, I like her power. Wish she could make people float. "Wingardium Leviosa!" (/Hides HP Fan]
Couldn't Anna have, you know, hidden her power a bit? I know she was like, showing it for what it was, but now everyone dislikes her. :(
Ana, thou fool! We're /all/ jealous. Sigh.
iLOL at her first meeting with Josh. If only she knew the drama, eh? xD
Ah, love the ending. Like, "First I'll kill her and - damn, I'm peckish ..."
10/21/2010 c1 clarity-eatworld
It is time. *grave voice*
ANYWAY,
You know I've always liked this chapter. :L Like, we don't go straight into Annie & the wolf - there's a bit about the Headmistress who tortures students (figuratively), and stuff. And I know some people don't like it, but I adore it. Also, the bit where Annie's mom gestures upwards - I know the HM sees it as he's dead, I was always like, "No. He's an angel, fool." In a Mr. T voice, of course. XD It's, like, hidden. LOLOL.
And, of course, Josh's introduction - which is WAY before Mary knew, mwaha.
Dramatic ending is dramatic.
It is time. *grave voice*
ANYWAY,
You know I've always liked this chapter. :L Like, we don't go straight into Annie & the wolf - there's a bit about the Headmistress who tortures students (figuratively), and stuff. And I know some people don't like it, but I adore it. Also, the bit where Annie's mom gestures upwards - I know the HM sees it as he's dead, I was always like, "No. He's an angel, fool." In a Mr. T voice, of course. XD It's, like, hidden. LOLOL.
And, of course, Josh's introduction - which is WAY before Mary knew, mwaha.
Dramatic ending is dramatic.
10/14/2010 c1 Ryhona
~We all have choices. But our decisions are already known.~ Evil Star.
OMFG! I read that series! You read it too?~~ I never thought I'd live to see the day when someone actually knew what book I was talking about.
~We all have choices. But our decisions are already known.~ Evil Star.
OMFG! I read that series! You read it too?~~ I never thought I'd live to see the day when someone actually knew what book I was talking about.
9/26/2010 c31 loveables
Wow. very creative stories and interesting concepts. im not goin to say much but i definately enjoyed reading this. loved it.
Wow. very creative stories and interesting concepts. im not goin to say much but i definately enjoyed reading this. loved it.
9/8/2010 c31 maybealoveletter
Wonderful story. Absolutely. The first couple chapters, I was afraid it was a little too much like Harry Potter, but I was proven wrong. Plus you started mentioning apparating and Voldemort in later chapters, which made me laugh. =) I'm not much of a believer in god, so the way you portrayed the world was great... with the Bible being edited by human beings and such. It had good and evil (which go hand in hand,) but not so much in the Bible sense. =) Keep up the amazing writing skills, my dear. =) =)
Wonderful story. Absolutely. The first couple chapters, I was afraid it was a little too much like Harry Potter, but I was proven wrong. Plus you started mentioning apparating and Voldemort in later chapters, which made me laugh. =) I'm not much of a believer in god, so the way you portrayed the world was great... with the Bible being edited by human beings and such. It had good and evil (which go hand in hand,) but not so much in the Bible sense. =) Keep up the amazing writing skills, my dear. =) =)
9/8/2010 c31 controlledsoul
So Honestly, I'm not too fond of reviewing stories and such. I think quite the time consumer. However, I couldn't help but review this story. It was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. For once, I was happy with the beginning AND the ending. I loved the ending- it was acutally satisfying. Unlike many which simply have the cliche 'happy ending'(those just tend to annoy me to a limit) The characters were lovely, each realistic in their own way. Albeit, Anna did tend to piss me off a LOT in the chapter where she insisted 'oh, do what you want. kill whoever you want'- but some sense did get knocked into her, so I'm glad. As for the twists and such, I'm glad because there were a few I did pick out, but some, like the wolf being his brother, was quite the surprise for me. Now, enough of my rambling on here.
Just wanted to tell you- excellent story- 4.5/5 (and considering my pickiness, that's pretty awesome) And hope to see more of your writings :)
So Honestly, I'm not too fond of reviewing stories and such. I think quite the time consumer. However, I couldn't help but review this story. It was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. For once, I was happy with the beginning AND the ending. I loved the ending- it was acutally satisfying. Unlike many which simply have the cliche 'happy ending'(those just tend to annoy me to a limit) The characters were lovely, each realistic in their own way. Albeit, Anna did tend to piss me off a LOT in the chapter where she insisted 'oh, do what you want. kill whoever you want'- but some sense did get knocked into her, so I'm glad. As for the twists and such, I'm glad because there were a few I did pick out, but some, like the wolf being his brother, was quite the surprise for me. Now, enough of my rambling on here.
Just wanted to tell you- excellent story- 4.5/5 (and considering my pickiness, that's pretty awesome) And hope to see more of your writings :)
9/4/2010 c31 Warrior-Princess06
'OMG.! I love the Ending..
it's great and interesting..
very unexpected and happy ending too..
I love it when the story i read is happy ending..haha..
because this fast few days, i read a 2 fics that are both sad endings, they made me sad, disappointed, upset, devastated, heartbroken, what else? haha.! LOl! :) anyways, like i said i love this fic..! :) Actually, this fic was recommended by one of my friends..hehe.! :D I Love Anna and Josh to the fullest..it's a good thing that they're both alive..
if it's not, i'm going to be disappoint too.! :)
I almost cried when Anna died, you know.! T_T
Anyways, Thanks for sharing your imagination to us..
good job and goodluck to your future stories.! :)
PS: sorry if i didn't review each chapter, it's just that i'm too excited to read the next chapter..hehe.! :) You can consider this fic a 31 reviews.! *wink* :D
'OMG.! I love the Ending..
it's great and interesting..
very unexpected and happy ending too..
I love it when the story i read is happy ending..haha..
because this fast few days, i read a 2 fics that are both sad endings, they made me sad, disappointed, upset, devastated, heartbroken, what else? haha.! LOl! :) anyways, like i said i love this fic..! :) Actually, this fic was recommended by one of my friends..hehe.! :D I Love Anna and Josh to the fullest..it's a good thing that they're both alive..
if it's not, i'm going to be disappoint too.! :)
I almost cried when Anna died, you know.! T_T
Anyways, Thanks for sharing your imagination to us..
good job and goodluck to your future stories.! :)
PS: sorry if i didn't review each chapter, it's just that i'm too excited to read the next chapter..hehe.! :) You can consider this fic a 31 reviews.! *wink* :D
9/3/2010 c31 1Damned to heaven
Wow...just wow.
When I began reading I didn't expect this. I figured you're Muslim? It had a lot of Islam and I love how you worked it in. Josh and Anna as our good/bad sides/angel/devil, lol that was a good suprise.
I'm still in awe. I kinda stopped reading supernatural on fp, you've got me back into it. This is publishable...one day I hope to have a copy in the form of a book.
I can't tell you how much I'm in love with this story. Thank you for putting it up and thank god I found it; it got me through my fast.
Keep writing, keep rocking.
Mayday Parade fan eh?
1Damned to heavenWow...just wow.
When I began reading I didn't expect this. I figured you're Muslim? It had a lot of Islam and I love how you worked it in. Josh and Anna as our good/bad sides/angel/devil, lol that was a good suprise.
I'm still in awe. I kinda stopped reading supernatural on fp, you've got me back into it. This is publishable...one day I hope to have a copy in the form of a book.
I can't tell you how much I'm in love with this story. Thank you for putting it up and thank god I found it; it got me through my fast.
Keep writing, keep rocking.
Mayday Parade fan eh?
8/22/2010 c31 Lala Verhovenhaven
Wonderful, I loved the ending! It was so unexpecting and sad and beautiful. I want to cry but I feel like laughing, it made me think, 'How could this one story make you feel this way!' Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this. This story is a blessing and a curse, but I think you know what I mean ;) StOrM I will never forget this story :')
Wonderful, I loved the ending! It was so unexpecting and sad and beautiful. I want to cry but I feel like laughing, it made me think, 'How could this one story make you feel this way!' Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this. This story is a blessing and a curse, but I think you know what I mean ;) StOrM I will never forget this story :')
8/19/2010 c31 vix
I liked the ending. Not cliche or cheesy. Good. =p Well done. Pretty much read the whole thing in one setting.
I liked the ending. Not cliche or cheesy. Good. =p Well done. Pretty much read the whole thing in one setting.