for The Story You Shouldn't Know10/26/2015 c1 Guest
Good story. I hope I don't lose interest.
Good story. I hope I don't lose interest.
10/26/2015 c1 Guest
The title is so eye-catching. Very interesting
The title is so eye-catching. Very interesting
6/21/2015 c33 Demon Chic 101
I really liked this story. I thought it was very well written and while the ending is not my favorite part, I thought it was very sincere and true to the story. It was honest and creative and I loved every minute of reading this wonderful book. Good job! I know I'll come back to this story one day and still be thrilled when reading it.
I really liked this story. I thought it was very well written and while the ending is not my favorite part, I thought it was very sincere and true to the story. It was honest and creative and I loved every minute of reading this wonderful book. Good job! I know I'll come back to this story one day and still be thrilled when reading it.
12/18/2014 c33 
75AlysonSerenaStone
I really enjoyed this story! It was really well written and well done! I loved all your characters and the world you created. Nice work!
75AlysonSerenaStoneI really enjoyed this story! It was really well written and well done! I loved all your characters and the world you created. Nice work!
12/12/2014 c22 AlysonSerenaStone
Great chapter! I was afraid that something bad was going to happen! I'm glad that Josh came in and saved the day!
Great chapter! I was afraid that something bad was going to happen! I'm glad that Josh came in and saved the day!
12/7/2014 c17 AlysonSerenaStone
I really like Kane...I don't know why, but he is a very interesting character. I hope he's in the later chapters.
I really like Kane...I don't know why, but he is a very interesting character. I hope he's in the later chapters.
11/29/2014 c9 AlysonSerenaStone
I really liked this chapter! I liked the interaction between Kane and Josh-it was just great! Anyway, off to read more!
I really liked this chapter! I liked the interaction between Kane and Josh-it was just great! Anyway, off to read more!
11/20/2014 c1 AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful opening chapter! I love all of the detail you put into describing it! Great description of the headmistress. The first half of the prologue was probably my favourite-though I did like it all. Great work!
Wonderful opening chapter! I love all of the detail you put into describing it! Great description of the headmistress. The first half of the prologue was probably my favourite-though I did like it all. Great work!
5/18/2014 c30 guest
I think the best song to this chapter is 'lay me down' by the dirty heads.
I think the best song to this chapter is 'lay me down' by the dirty heads.
2/25/2014 c33 DragonOwl
Sorry the login didn't work a minute ago, so that previous guest review was by me! Anyway, I love wolf so much - I think it's his wise word stuff and the fact I thought Josh said he was a yoda teacher when I first read the sentence!
Sorry the login didn't work a minute ago, so that previous guest review was by me! Anyway, I love wolf so much - I think it's his wise word stuff and the fact I thought Josh said he was a yoda teacher when I first read the sentence!
2/25/2014 c31 Guest
I really loved reading this story - it had such a detailed and thought out way of looking at good and evil. I loved Wolf especially, and I'm really glad that Safia and Hussein survived! you created so many characters that I love, and I loved Josh and Anna together so much, especially when Josh had to deal with his new found emotions! It was incredibly realistic and so much more than I expected to read - I clicked on just to see and I got drawn to it after the first few paragraphs - and I really loved the philosophical side to it. It is a thought provoking amazingness that more people should know about! I feel sad for Marcus/ Wolf though but I really liked the twist at the end. Thank you for an amazing amazing read!
I really loved reading this story - it had such a detailed and thought out way of looking at good and evil. I loved Wolf especially, and I'm really glad that Safia and Hussein survived! you created so many characters that I love, and I loved Josh and Anna together so much, especially when Josh had to deal with his new found emotions! It was incredibly realistic and so much more than I expected to read - I clicked on just to see and I got drawn to it after the first few paragraphs - and I really loved the philosophical side to it. It is a thought provoking amazingness that more people should know about! I feel sad for Marcus/ Wolf though but I really liked the twist at the end. Thank you for an amazing amazing read!
12/1/2013 c31 5Juliet Scar
ahahahaa you tied everything together oh-so-perfectly. I'm beginning to think you based Anna off of YOU, with her old, constant strive for perfection ;) Even the whole them running away had a purpose in the end. I thought the previous chappie had been the last but I shoulda checked. This ending was quite clever because it seemed to actually make sense with the whole morals in humans thing! You are FABULOUS!
5Juliet Scarahahahaa you tied everything together oh-so-perfectly. I'm beginning to think you based Anna off of YOU, with her old, constant strive for perfection ;) Even the whole them running away had a purpose in the end. I thought the previous chappie had been the last but I shoulda checked. This ending was quite clever because it seemed to actually make sense with the whole morals in humans thing! You are FABULOUS!
12/1/2013 c30 Juliet Scar
UGH. When I started this chapter, the last one (29), I went straight to the end because I couldn't wait and if the end was depressing, I would have just not finish the story LOLOLOL ahhaha I am so logical, aren't I?! I loved this story, but it was kind of... it had a negative effect on my feelings so... ya. Just too serious for me, personally. BUT IT WAS SODA DANG ADDICTING and WELL WRITTEN that even when I wanted to stop, I couldn't and ohhhmiiiiigoodness. You're so talented! You should consider writing something more lighthearted though. Not stereotypical but, like, less angering and depressing I suppose. It's just a suggestion! You really do have a gift for writing. This story was so unimaginably complex and I don't know how you did it but you did. HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THIS STUFF?! It's so detailed and has so much characterization and the fact that you somehow, made up the basic storyline seems so impossible to me! It's so [insert positive word such as 'amazing'] to me how you planned things so well and, goodness, I am writeless b/c of your amazingness. I read the authors notes occasionally and saw that you planned Wolf's coming back 10 chapters beforehand I was like WHAT THE HECK? How? Cuz for me, it's like, comes as it comes or it gets boring and you're all, lemme plan this whole thing and still put an extraordinary amount of passion in every word. Pretty nice, efficient pattern you've got there. Who thought you it? Or did you learn by yourself? KEEP UP THE [insert overly awesome word] WORK!
UGH. When I started this chapter, the last one (29), I went straight to the end because I couldn't wait and if the end was depressing, I would have just not finish the story LOLOLOL ahhaha I am so logical, aren't I?! I loved this story, but it was kind of... it had a negative effect on my feelings so... ya. Just too serious for me, personally. BUT IT WAS SODA DANG ADDICTING and WELL WRITTEN that even when I wanted to stop, I couldn't and ohhhmiiiiigoodness. You're so talented! You should consider writing something more lighthearted though. Not stereotypical but, like, less angering and depressing I suppose. It's just a suggestion! You really do have a gift for writing. This story was so unimaginably complex and I don't know how you did it but you did. HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THIS STUFF?! It's so detailed and has so much characterization and the fact that you somehow, made up the basic storyline seems so impossible to me! It's so [insert positive word such as 'amazing'] to me how you planned things so well and, goodness, I am writeless b/c of your amazingness. I read the authors notes occasionally and saw that you planned Wolf's coming back 10 chapters beforehand I was like WHAT THE HECK? How? Cuz for me, it's like, comes as it comes or it gets boring and you're all, lemme plan this whole thing and still put an extraordinary amount of passion in every word. Pretty nice, efficient pattern you've got there. Who thought you it? Or did you learn by yourself? KEEP UP THE [insert overly awesome word] WORK!