for The Story You Shouldn't Know7/5/2010 c28 freakee
no! why did you stop? upload soon, please!
no! why did you stop? upload soon, please!
7/5/2010 c28 like-diamonds
sorry i gots no theories . when things get this intense i like to take it all in.
i thought it so...strange that anna was thinking about school and hussein when when josh was in the middle of a life and death battle against satan. i know she isnt aware of whats going on but i expected maybe a little more of a reaction out of her given the warning signs she received.
however, all in all i really enjoyed it. the battle was a brilliant read, with the different types of attacks and so on. i was soo relieved at the end to see satan panicking, and personally i think he's in for it if he tries to hurt anna.
great work, and get that other chapter out soon! =D
sorry i gots no theories . when things get this intense i like to take it all in.
i thought it so...strange that anna was thinking about school and hussein when when josh was in the middle of a life and death battle against satan. i know she isnt aware of whats going on but i expected maybe a little more of a reaction out of her given the warning signs she received.
however, all in all i really enjoyed it. the battle was a brilliant read, with the different types of attacks and so on. i was soo relieved at the end to see satan panicking, and personally i think he's in for it if he tries to hurt anna.
great work, and get that other chapter out soon! =D
7/5/2010 c28 
3arcadianprincess
I predict that there will be a big, smashing battle but in the end Josh and Anna together will manage to be together and find balance. But, in all honesty, I have no idea how the actual plot is going to get to that point haha! I feel like there will be a big clash involving Anna, Josh, Satan, and possibly even Hussein. Possibly Safia, too, but who knows? AND I also can't help but think Anna's parents identities have some part to play because we still don't really know who they are, but I could be totally wrong on that point. Keep up the good work! This story has come so far since Chapter 1!
3arcadianprincessI predict that there will be a big, smashing battle but in the end Josh and Anna together will manage to be together and find balance. But, in all honesty, I have no idea how the actual plot is going to get to that point haha! I feel like there will be a big clash involving Anna, Josh, Satan, and possibly even Hussein. Possibly Safia, too, but who knows? AND I also can't help but think Anna's parents identities have some part to play because we still don't really know who they are, but I could be totally wrong on that point. Keep up the good work! This story has come so far since Chapter 1!
7/5/2010 c28 3M.Bianca
define "very soon"!
this was a great chapter! you described the battle very well. if they would have started to throw punches I would've stopped reading. not kidding.
so hurry up!
3M.Biancadefine "very soon"!
this was a great chapter! you described the battle very well. if they would have started to throw punches I would've stopped reading. not kidding.
so hurry up!
7/5/2010 c28 passiononfire
ohmigosh, ohmigosh! that was such an intense chapter! ah i want to know what happens next...i love this chapter!
ohmigosh, ohmigosh! that was such an intense chapter! ah i want to know what happens next...i love this chapter!
7/5/2010 c28 2katicus
i honestly can't predict what's gonna happen - there's so many possibilities (wow, thats a long word!) :)
really intense chapter and i wanna know what's gonna happen to anna!
2katicusi honestly can't predict what's gonna happen - there's so many possibilities (wow, thats a long word!) :)
really intense chapter and i wanna know what's gonna happen to anna!
7/4/2010 c28 3V.C.Kazz
ah okay so i guess my theory is right so far. anna is getting involved and josh is hurting her indirectly-ish and now satan is gonna get her! lol btw lords of the flies! that was legit! okay soo please dont let us wait this long for the next chapter cant wait!
3V.C.Kazzah okay so i guess my theory is right so far. anna is getting involved and josh is hurting her indirectly-ish and now satan is gonna get her! lol btw lords of the flies! that was legit! okay soo please dont let us wait this long for the next chapter cant wait!
7/4/2010 c28 6sooner or later its over
i thought it was really good :) just the right amount of everything
6sooner or later its overi thought it was really good :) just the right amount of everything
7/4/2010 c28 blazinghues
OMG OMG OMGOMGSDkhagilsduhfg -hypervenilating- I'm so confused! Was it Anna that let out that last scream? You are KILLING ME (US!) here! Gah! You have to update soon. it wasn't too dramatic at ALL. It was seriously the most epic, awesomely written battle scene I have ever read! I really can't see the outcome of this. Please update soon. Like tomorrow... :D
OMG OMG OMGOMGSDkhagilsduhfg -hypervenilating- I'm so confused! Was it Anna that let out that last scream? You are KILLING ME (US!) here! Gah! You have to update soon. it wasn't too dramatic at ALL. It was seriously the most epic, awesomely written battle scene I have ever read! I really can't see the outcome of this. Please update soon. Like tomorrow... :D
7/4/2010 c28 1readaholicxxx
oh my God that ending was totally evil!
I can't wait to find out what happens...I'm waiting with bated breath!
1readaholicxxxoh my God that ending was totally evil!
I can't wait to find out what happens...I'm waiting with bated breath!
7/4/2010 c28 My-Heart-Of-Music
Oh. My. God. That is so freaky. Did you know, not a second ago I was thinking about your story and then I went to check my emails. An update wasn't there, but when I refreshed the page; Walla! There is your update! How much of an epic coinkydink is that?
Just thought I'd share that with you ;) Now, to read your chapter! :D
Isn't Hell just lovely? Like, who wouldn't go there for a holiday?
...not.
Haha, I love how you disguise Satan as a fragile old man. So deceiving ;P
Typo, hun. You typed "msoment"
I swear to God, if you finish this on a cliffhanger...
ARGH! HOW COULD YOU? oh my god, I could totally virtually punch you right now! You're just lucky I have a LOT of patience! *hmf!*
Anyway, THAT WAS A F*CKING AWESOME CHAPTER!
Yes, I swore. I felt I needed to ;P
I have a prediction on what's going to happen. I would tell you, because if I'm right I could totally brag about it, but I have a feeling that I'm wrong.
I loved this chapter :) I think you really should publish this story, it's so good!
Toodles,
Natalie :)
Oh. My. God. That is so freaky. Did you know, not a second ago I was thinking about your story and then I went to check my emails. An update wasn't there, but when I refreshed the page; Walla! There is your update! How much of an epic coinkydink is that?
Just thought I'd share that with you ;) Now, to read your chapter! :D
Isn't Hell just lovely? Like, who wouldn't go there for a holiday?
...not.
Haha, I love how you disguise Satan as a fragile old man. So deceiving ;P
Typo, hun. You typed "msoment"
I swear to God, if you finish this on a cliffhanger...
ARGH! HOW COULD YOU? oh my god, I could totally virtually punch you right now! You're just lucky I have a LOT of patience! *hmf!*
Anyway, THAT WAS A F*CKING AWESOME CHAPTER!
Yes, I swore. I felt I needed to ;P
I have a prediction on what's going to happen. I would tell you, because if I'm right I could totally brag about it, but I have a feeling that I'm wrong.
I loved this chapter :) I think you really should publish this story, it's so good!
Toodles,
Natalie :)
7/4/2010 c28 goanywhere
evil. evil. evil.
me no like.
but i like the chapter.
love it.
poor anna...
and josh.
i really like him.
i hope they're both okay.
update soon.
evil. evil. evil.
me no like.
but i like the chapter.
love it.
poor anna...
and josh.
i really like him.
i hope they're both okay.
update soon.
7/4/2010 c27 joker1234
very well written. I can't wait until the next chapter! I hope the ending stays happy! :-P
very well written. I can't wait until the next chapter! I hope the ending stays happy! :-P