for The Cheshire Cat Smile4/3/2009 c4 WritingWithChocolate
HI! im SO glad u finally got ur comp up and running...im SO sorry i couldnt help...but stupid fictionpress wouldnt let me...XP...anyhoo...anyhoo...this chappie is SO GOOD...i gots another sundae *taunts*...update and its urs XD
HI! im SO glad u finally got ur comp up and running...im SO sorry i couldnt help...but stupid fictionpress wouldnt let me...XP...anyhoo...anyhoo...this chappie is SO GOOD...i gots another sundae *taunts*...update and its urs XD
3/31/2009 c3 
6goldenlifex14
this is really good! there are some grammar and spelling mistakes but that's ok. i can't wait to find out more! update soon!
6goldenlifex14this is really good! there are some grammar and spelling mistakes but that's ok. i can't wait to find out more! update soon!
3/30/2009 c3 WritingWithChocolate
wow...this guy is creepy..lolz...in a hot stalkerish kinda way though...XD and what did u mean "of course, his skin was cold"...is he a vampire or something? anyhoo...UPDATE SOON...
wow...this guy is creepy..lolz...in a hot stalkerish kinda way though...XD and what did u mean "of course, his skin was cold"...is he a vampire or something? anyhoo...UPDATE SOON...
3/7/2009 c1 Fuzzywuzzy922
Very nice story. Some grammer and spelling errors, but still interesting plot. I'm waiting to see what'll happen next.
Very nice story. Some grammer and spelling errors, but still interesting plot. I'm waiting to see what'll happen next.
3/3/2009 c1 WritingWithChocolate
wait...bit confused...is he human? otherwise...REALLY INTERESTING...UPDATE SON! :D
wait...bit confused...is he human? otherwise...REALLY INTERESTING...UPDATE SON! :D
3/3/2009 c1 mother duck
I loved it . . Do you use note books for your writting? You did good kid love you dearly
I loved it . . Do you use note books for your writting? You did good kid love you dearly