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for Silence

3/4/2009 c1 3Talvez
You paint a strong image of silence in this poem. It feels so calming and yet waiting for something that we do not know but should be afraid of!

One little thing~you may need a comma in the second stanza after sadness because the next phrase describes 'the sadness'.

"Silence can be the sadness the absence of happy noise"

I love the concept of silence.

Thank you for sharing this poem!
3/4/2009 c1 35vendettalexicon
You might want to pick through the cliches so its not so much of a nuisance to read.


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