for The Ride4/22/2009 c1 
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You are well on your way to being my favorite author on FictionPress.
"My Suicidal Teddy Bear" was very good, and the plot twist here was so unexpected as to be worth re-reading. The irony here is grand.
If you actually wrote THIS in one sitting, I'd love to read what you can do when you put your mind to it. If you haven't already thought of it, you should read some literary criticism. An imagination like this combined with a goal and direction could be a powerful thing. :D
1paperbulletYou are well on your way to being my favorite author on FictionPress.
"My Suicidal Teddy Bear" was very good, and the plot twist here was so unexpected as to be worth re-reading. The irony here is grand.
If you actually wrote THIS in one sitting, I'd love to read what you can do when you put your mind to it. If you haven't already thought of it, you should read some literary criticism. An imagination like this combined with a goal and direction could be a powerful thing. :D