for Liquid Dreams9/16/2007 c1 
34Ashlee Pond
Wow. This is a great piece...I've just found out my friend is an alcoholic...and this is pretty much the exact same as what he said to me, though more lyrical...Thank-you for posting such a beautiful piece. Bravo.
34Ashlee PondWow. This is a great piece...I've just found out my friend is an alcoholic...and this is pretty much the exact same as what he said to me, though more lyrical...Thank-you for posting such a beautiful piece. Bravo.
2/18/2004 c1 1Bathmat
"Follow a star," they always say - Great advice, but which one?
What if I spend my life chasing a dull and distant sun?"
Great line and a great poem... thankyou!
1Bathmat"Follow a star," they always say - Great advice, but which one?
What if I spend my life chasing a dull and distant sun?"
Great line and a great poem... thankyou!
7/13/2001 c1 17L'acteur
I think you've done a really good job of expressing what goes on in an alcoholic's mind. I can relate to the feelings, though I don't use alcohol to "escape."
17L'acteurI think you've done a really good job of expressing what goes on in an alcoholic's mind. I can relate to the feelings, though I don't use alcohol to "escape."
6/26/2001 c1 7The Lighter Side of Darkness
Brillinat poem, if you hadn't have said i wouldn't have guessed it was about Alcohol...i'd have/did assumed it was about dreams liquid and slipping through someones fingers. Anyhoo it was truely a brilliant poem and very deep. wow! :)
7The Lighter Side of DarknessBrillinat poem, if you hadn't have said i wouldn't have guessed it was about Alcohol...i'd have/did assumed it was about dreams liquid and slipping through someones fingers. Anyhoo it was truely a brilliant poem and very deep. wow! :)
4/25/2001 c1 mysticGohan33
very good, and well thought out. It makes a lot of sense
very good, and well thought out. It makes a lot of sense
4/24/2001 c1 Gradual Decline
I.Love.You. That really blew me away. Gods... I- it's... Wow.
I.Love.You. That really blew me away. Gods... I- it's... Wow.
4/24/2001 c1 10Obsidian Butterfly
Ooh, this is definitely talented! I especailly identified with the part, 'what if I spend my life chasing a dull and distant sun?'. Although I can't identify with the theme, I do understand about the indecisiveness. You should write more!
10Obsidian ButterflyOoh, this is definitely talented! I especailly identified with the part, 'what if I spend my life chasing a dull and distant sun?'. Although I can't identify with the theme, I do understand about the indecisiveness. You should write more!