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4/25/2011 c1 11Javajive
Hi, thanks so much for the note you left for my story. Wanted to return the favour, so here I am and not knowing what to expect, I have to say I really enjoyed the light mood of this beginning. Cliche' hmm, maybe, but then again it's only a cliche if you write it like everybody else and you seem to have a style of your own. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the whole brother's friend/stalker theme :) . Obviously from the mount of reviews you received on this, it was popular so I have high hopes.

Love, Java
7/11/2010 c16 2Jimmi J
Loved it :)
5/8/2010 c16 3Aria-Rose G.H Rhuins
aww love, well aret you a cute flippin monkey ? ;) call me ? got the day off workk!
4/6/2010 c1 BluePillow
Haha! Always fear the amazing ninja skills! xD
2/23/2010 c16 Anonymous
Good story but I felt there were a few things that could be improved:

- Mentioning when POV changes, especially within a chapter.

- Grammatical errors (there were several that interrupted the flow of the story).

Anyway, good overall. Keep writing. :)
2/23/2010 c16 Lexy7432
Aw So SWEET, gotta luv happy endings eh?
2/22/2010 c16 pbgurl
I liked the ending but I felt that maybe you could add a little bit more to the ending without having to cut anything out. I hope that makes sense, sometimes I have a hard time explaining things, lol.

But I still liked where you went with it ^_^

I'm gonna miss Adel a lot :(

I'll be on the lookout to read your next stories ^_^

-Liz :D
2/22/2010 c16 DaLlama
OH pft this sucked.

I KID I KID I KID AND I LOVE YOU GODDAMMIT. =)

neways this was so cute! it was just a lil confusing for POVs at the end because you forgot to put a break. CANT WAIT FOR NEST STORAY ;)
1/31/2010 c15 Lexy7432
I like this story and hope it has a happy ending
1/31/2010 c15 1esmeralda123
luv it =)
1/31/2010 c15 1AlphaBeatKayGee
Clify! Goodness! Update son
1/31/2010 c12 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
LOL..oh how stero types irk me so ^_^
1/31/2010 c11 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
^_^
1/31/2010 c10 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
That's so sweet! ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
1/31/2010 c15 pbgurl
gah! I hope they make up next chapter. They have too!

I'm sad though that it's coming to an end. :(

-Liz :D
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