
4/25/2011 c1
11Javajive
Hi, thanks so much for the note you left for my story. Wanted to return the favour, so here I am and not knowing what to expect, I have to say I really enjoyed the light mood of this beginning. Cliche' hmm, maybe, but then again it's only a cliche if you write it like everybody else and you seem to have a style of your own. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the whole brother's friend/stalker theme :) . Obviously from the mount of reviews you received on this, it was popular so I have high hopes.
Love, Java

Hi, thanks so much for the note you left for my story. Wanted to return the favour, so here I am and not knowing what to expect, I have to say I really enjoyed the light mood of this beginning. Cliche' hmm, maybe, but then again it's only a cliche if you write it like everybody else and you seem to have a style of your own. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the whole brother's friend/stalker theme :) . Obviously from the mount of reviews you received on this, it was popular so I have high hopes.
Love, Java
5/8/2010 c16
3Aria-Rose G.H Rhuins
aww love, well aret you a cute flippin monkey ? ;) call me ? got the day off workk!

aww love, well aret you a cute flippin monkey ? ;) call me ? got the day off workk!
2/23/2010 c16 Anonymous
Good story but I felt there were a few things that could be improved:
- Mentioning when POV changes, especially within a chapter.
- Grammatical errors (there were several that interrupted the flow of the story).
Anyway, good overall. Keep writing. :)
Good story but I felt there were a few things that could be improved:
- Mentioning when POV changes, especially within a chapter.
- Grammatical errors (there were several that interrupted the flow of the story).
Anyway, good overall. Keep writing. :)
2/22/2010 c16 pbgurl
I liked the ending but I felt that maybe you could add a little bit more to the ending without having to cut anything out. I hope that makes sense, sometimes I have a hard time explaining things, lol.
But I still liked where you went with it ^_^
I'm gonna miss Adel a lot :(
I'll be on the lookout to read your next stories ^_^
-Liz :D
I liked the ending but I felt that maybe you could add a little bit more to the ending without having to cut anything out. I hope that makes sense, sometimes I have a hard time explaining things, lol.
But I still liked where you went with it ^_^
I'm gonna miss Adel a lot :(
I'll be on the lookout to read your next stories ^_^
-Liz :D
2/22/2010 c16 DaLlama
OH pft this sucked.
I KID I KID I KID AND I LOVE YOU GODDAMMIT. =)
neways this was so cute! it was just a lil confusing for POVs at the end because you forgot to put a break. CANT WAIT FOR NEST STORAY ;)
OH pft this sucked.
I KID I KID I KID AND I LOVE YOU GODDAMMIT. =)
neways this was so cute! it was just a lil confusing for POVs at the end because you forgot to put a break. CANT WAIT FOR NEST STORAY ;)
1/31/2010 c15 pbgurl
gah! I hope they make up next chapter. They have too!
I'm sad though that it's coming to an end. :(
-Liz :D
gah! I hope they make up next chapter. They have too!
I'm sad though that it's coming to an end. :(
-Liz :D