for The Goodbye8/31/2016 c16 
2S.D Stevens
Wow, beautifully written short pieces. I think I held my breath to the end! I'm so gad the ending was worth it.
2S.D StevensWow, beautifully written short pieces. I think I held my breath to the end! I'm so gad the ending was worth it.
1/26/2013 c16 2auroraglider
I have to pause a moment for my vision to clear from my tears. That was both heart-wrenching and happy at the same time. You have a real knack at capturing life's emotional rollercoasters and presenting them in such beautifully disciplined ways. Your characters take ownership of their problems, keep them contained and through hope and faith, they prevail, always with their self respect and dignity intact. That is so refreshing. Many Kudos!
2auroragliderI have to pause a moment for my vision to clear from my tears. That was both heart-wrenching and happy at the same time. You have a real knack at capturing life's emotional rollercoasters and presenting them in such beautifully disciplined ways. Your characters take ownership of their problems, keep them contained and through hope and faith, they prevail, always with their self respect and dignity intact. That is so refreshing. Many Kudos!
1/18/2012 c16 brneyestx
awwwww thank you.. I do love fluffy happy endings!
awwwww thank you.. I do love fluffy happy endings!
1/18/2012 c15 brneyestx
cliff hanger.. really! *taps foot* NOW! a cliff hanger *grins*
cliff hanger.. really! *taps foot* NOW! a cliff hanger *grins*
1/18/2012 c14 brneyestx
you got that one down.. MEN so stubborn! *just wanna slap him* he waits to long and his she will be lost.
you got that one down.. MEN so stubborn! *just wanna slap him* he waits to long and his she will be lost.
1/18/2012 c13 brneyestx
NOooo you dont drag me thru 13 chapters to have to give up! *yells at computer* "dont give up HOPE"
NOooo you dont drag me thru 13 chapters to have to give up! *yells at computer* "dont give up HOPE"
1/18/2012 c12 brneyestx
a ray of sunshine..
a ray of sunshine..
1/18/2012 c10 brneyestx
awwww dreams are powerful and transcend time and space
awwww dreams are powerful and transcend time and space
1/18/2012 c9 brneyestx
love how you twisted the two lines in each chapter.. we breathe life into each other..
love how you twisted the two lines in each chapter.. we breathe life into each other..
1/18/2012 c8 brneyestx
you have me worried that this may not be a happy ending...
you have me worried that this may not be a happy ending...
1/18/2012 c5 brneyestx
having been an Old School military wife..(before email) when it was snail mail weeks apart and phone calls at odd hours unable to hear over the street noise from a pay phone.. you lived for news, something to know that they were safe and thinking of you too, I can relate.
having been an Old School military wife..(before email) when it was snail mail weeks apart and phone calls at odd hours unable to hear over the street noise from a pay phone.. you lived for news, something to know that they were safe and thinking of you too, I can relate.
1/18/2012 c4 brneyestx
powerful visual
powerful visual
1/18/2012 c3 brneyestx
hope, well written.
hope, well written.
1/18/2012 c2 brneyestx
beauftiful, the weight of his action on his heart. *sniff sniff*
beauftiful, the weight of his action on his heart. *sniff sniff*
1/18/2012 c1 brneyestx
I just found these, cant wait to read them.. I love drabbles and this one hit right the heart. What a great start.
I just found these, cant wait to read them.. I love drabbles and this one hit right the heart. What a great start.