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3/11/2009 c1 criti-sized
This was very nice and sad. I liked it and how you easily displayed the emotions of the doctor and how he was trying to withstand everything around him.

Great short.


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3/8/2009 c1 4chel bel
Wow, that was really good! I always find war stories touching, and this really did it for me. It was really powerful, and honestly I couldn't find anything I didn't like about it. I especially liked the end with Mercier coming back and everything. I wasn't expecting it, but it really added to the story. Excellent piece of work. Good luck in the contest! :)
3/8/2009 c1 13Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu
Herro there! Me again lol! :D Anyway, you did say you want reviews for this one and hence, here I am. :) Ok, I can say it's a good work here. you do have a knack for doing war stories one-shot. I really like the way you did the supernatural aspects of this story and the overall feel. It really seems rather foreboding, but at the same time, I could feel the warmth of humanity here through the ghost guy here. And yeah, you're a true Candain nationalist huh? ;) Anyway, thanks for your recent review on A Ranger's Tale. Hope to see the final one for the updated chapter soon! ^^ Bye! :)
3/7/2009 c1 3DragonCeres
so sweet

and sad too

i like how you brought the "supernatural" elements into the story with Mercier's ghost and all. it really made me feel warm. and in the end, hope.

another thing i noticed is that you never actually mentioned the boy's name. that is definitely on purpose, right? i guess since you didn't give him a name, it makes the story so much more touching because he could be anyone. it allows everyone to relate to the boy and what had happened to him.

and yes, using a doctor's pov was also rather ingenious. it seems to say that everyone suffered in this war, including the healers.

good job ^.^
3/7/2009 c1 3Mercyette
Good job on the contest piece. I really liked it, considering the sad tone of the story. I cracked up with the whole "Canada" thing - I wish I could be as patriotic for the good ole USA. *SNORT* By the way, was he from the "state" of Ontario? Sorry, that's going to be an inside joke for a while now...

Anywho, in all seriousness, it was really good. :)
3/7/2009 c1 1A White Dimpled Spider
It's a very nice story. I especially liked the line "but still powerless in the fight between the beast that is war and the fragility of man."

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