for Duty3/11/2009 c1 criti-sized
This was very nice and sad. I liked it and how you easily displayed the emotions of the doctor and how he was trying to withstand everything around him.
Great short.
C.S.
The Roadhouse
This was very nice and sad. I liked it and how you easily displayed the emotions of the doctor and how he was trying to withstand everything around him.
Great short.
C.S.
The Roadhouse
3/8/2009 c1 
4chel bel
Wow, that was really good! I always find war stories touching, and this really did it for me. It was really powerful, and honestly I couldn't find anything I didn't like about it. I especially liked the end with Mercier coming back and everything. I wasn't expecting it, but it really added to the story. Excellent piece of work. Good luck in the contest! :)
4chel belWow, that was really good! I always find war stories touching, and this really did it for me. It was really powerful, and honestly I couldn't find anything I didn't like about it. I especially liked the end with Mercier coming back and everything. I wasn't expecting it, but it really added to the story. Excellent piece of work. Good luck in the contest! :)
3/8/2009 c1 13Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu
Herro there! Me again lol! :D Anyway, you did say you want reviews for this one and hence, here I am. :) Ok, I can say it's a good work here. you do have a knack for doing war stories one-shot. I really like the way you did the supernatural aspects of this story and the overall feel. It really seems rather foreboding, but at the same time, I could feel the warmth of humanity here through the ghost guy here. And yeah, you're a true Candain nationalist huh? ;) Anyway, thanks for your recent review on A Ranger's Tale. Hope to see the final one for the updated chapter soon! ^^ Bye! :)
13Tsumujikaze no SoujutsuHerro there! Me again lol! :D Anyway, you did say you want reviews for this one and hence, here I am. :) Ok, I can say it's a good work here. you do have a knack for doing war stories one-shot. I really like the way you did the supernatural aspects of this story and the overall feel. It really seems rather foreboding, but at the same time, I could feel the warmth of humanity here through the ghost guy here. And yeah, you're a true Candain nationalist huh? ;) Anyway, thanks for your recent review on A Ranger's Tale. Hope to see the final one for the updated chapter soon! ^^ Bye! :)
3/7/2009 c1 3DragonCeres
so sweet
and sad too
i like how you brought the "supernatural" elements into the story with Mercier's ghost and all. it really made me feel warm. and in the end, hope.
another thing i noticed is that you never actually mentioned the boy's name. that is definitely on purpose, right? i guess since you didn't give him a name, it makes the story so much more touching because he could be anyone. it allows everyone to relate to the boy and what had happened to him.
and yes, using a doctor's pov was also rather ingenious. it seems to say that everyone suffered in this war, including the healers.
good job ^.^
3DragonCeresso sweet
and sad too
i like how you brought the "supernatural" elements into the story with Mercier's ghost and all. it really made me feel warm. and in the end, hope.
another thing i noticed is that you never actually mentioned the boy's name. that is definitely on purpose, right? i guess since you didn't give him a name, it makes the story so much more touching because he could be anyone. it allows everyone to relate to the boy and what had happened to him.
and yes, using a doctor's pov was also rather ingenious. it seems to say that everyone suffered in this war, including the healers.
good job ^.^
3/7/2009 c1 3Mercyette
Good job on the contest piece. I really liked it, considering the sad tone of the story. I cracked up with the whole "Canada" thing - I wish I could be as patriotic for the good ole USA. *SNORT* By the way, was he from the "state" of Ontario? Sorry, that's going to be an inside joke for a while now...
Anywho, in all seriousness, it was really good. :)
3MercyetteGood job on the contest piece. I really liked it, considering the sad tone of the story. I cracked up with the whole "Canada" thing - I wish I could be as patriotic for the good ole USA. *SNORT* By the way, was he from the "state" of Ontario? Sorry, that's going to be an inside joke for a while now...
Anywho, in all seriousness, it was really good. :)
3/7/2009 c1 1A White Dimpled Spider
It's a very nice story. I especially liked the line "but still powerless in the fight between the beast that is war and the fragility of man."
:)
1A White Dimpled SpiderIt's a very nice story. I especially liked the line "but still powerless in the fight between the beast that is war and the fragility of man."
:)