
6/23/2009 c18 JZK
is Justin going to propose? it seems like it otherwise why would janie ask those questions?
is Justin going to propose? it seems like it otherwise why would janie ask those questions?
5/13/2009 c17 ShoppingGirl
Yes!
My favorite line is definitely "I'll help you carry your baggage, if you help me carry mine."
I like the way your story is moving.
Yes!
My favorite line is definitely "I'll help you carry your baggage, if you help me carry mine."
I like the way your story is moving.
4/13/2009 c15 JZK
this was a nice funny chapter
the end is so embarassing for natalie - i felt embarassed for her
this was a nice funny chapter
the end is so embarassing for natalie - i felt embarassed for her
3/23/2009 c13 angie
great chapter.can't wait for more update soon :)
great chapter.can't wait for more update soon :)
3/23/2009 c13 JZK
I kne wit - I guessed that Dustins mum might be dead and thatJaney would be his sister - Yey!
I cant wait to read more now that they have gotten over the "bump"
I kne wit - I guessed that Dustins mum might be dead and thatJaney would be his sister - Yey!
I cant wait to read more now that they have gotten over the "bump"
3/21/2009 c12 JZK
aww
she could have thought that Justin could have been with his sister who happened to be married at the food place when Natalie was there with her mum and sister - I mean Justin n the women might have pecked each tohers cheeks but ti doesnt mean they were married
this is so interesting -I cant wait for more
aww
she could have thought that Justin could have been with his sister who happened to be married at the food place when Natalie was there with her mum and sister - I mean Justin n the women might have pecked each tohers cheeks but ti doesnt mean they were married
this is so interesting -I cant wait for more
3/21/2009 c1 angie
by the way you might not be a writer but you are doing a great job writing this story i think you'll be one the best writers here.keep the good work up
by the way you might not be a writer but you are doing a great job writing this story i think you'll be one the best writers here.keep the good work up
3/21/2009 c12 angie
good chapter more please.i bet his not married.lol.update soon.thanks
good chapter more please.i bet his not married.lol.update soon.thanks
3/20/2009 c11
1Morgra
Almost every chapter I was giggling and thinking 'hey, I know that!' I've never thought of writing one of those papers as a story, very creative. I liked it a lot! Keep going.

Almost every chapter I was giggling and thinking 'hey, I know that!' I've never thought of writing one of those papers as a story, very creative. I liked it a lot! Keep going.
3/20/2009 c11 angie
good story so far.update soon can't wait to see what happens next.thanks
good story so far.update soon can't wait to see what happens next.thanks
3/20/2009 c11 reader
I'm enjoying the story very much. Please continue. You are doing a great job. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Update soon please! :)
I'm enjoying the story very much. Please continue. You are doing a great job. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Update soon please! :)