4/4/2009 c9 10LeLa London
great poem. i would be really interested in you continuing. it would be a waste of talent for you not to. that is if you want to continue.

off topic: if you find time, mind reading some of my stuff? i'd like to read some feedback for improvement.

thanks and i hope you keep writing!

4/4/2009 c7 LeLa London
you captured the feeling extremely well.

4/4/2009 c5 LeLa London
really sad but good in the way that you made me see your pain and feel it too.

4/4/2009 c3 LeLa London
so loving your poems. they're really lovely.

4/4/2009 c1 LeLa London
powerful and descriptive poem. i really loved it. you have a way with words and description. :) i'm off to read your other poems.