for Stained With You4/19/2011 c14 Bubbly Girl
So so good! Maan... i really just feel like smacking that stupid Marvell guy until he is even stupider! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
So so good! Maan... i really just feel like smacking that stupid Marvell guy until he is even stupider! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
4/19/2011 c14 Aneesha
Omg awwie!
That's all I have to say :D
I just hope Rachel doesn't regret it in the
Morning :/
Omg awwie!
That's all I have to say :D
I just hope Rachel doesn't regret it in the
Morning :/
4/19/2011 c14 
8castiel89
"How many times he imagined getting her out of her clothes, this was not the method he anticipated."
8castiel89"How many times he imagined getting her out of her clothes, this was not the method he anticipated."
4/19/2011 c14 11whisperedcares
Oh. My. Goggles. Ek! Are you kidding me? This was wonderful, and sad, but wonderful and fantastic and I'm just SO HAPPY! "Oh, it is love" by Hellogoodbye started going through my mind.
11whisperedcaresOh. My. Goggles. Ek! Are you kidding me? This was wonderful, and sad, but wonderful and fantastic and I'm just SO HAPPY! "Oh, it is love" by Hellogoodbye started going through my mind.
4/19/2011 c14 Witchy Mage
I am so so glad you made it turn out that way.
I thought it was a bit soon for Devon to allow himself to do that so soon, but then again with her completely agreeing, I can see why he would submit to her demands.
I look forward to seeing how this changes their dynamics.
I am so so glad you made it turn out that way.
I thought it was a bit soon for Devon to allow himself to do that so soon, but then again with her completely agreeing, I can see why he would submit to her demands.
I look forward to seeing how this changes their dynamics.
4/19/2011 c14 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
i hope she doesnt regret it in the next chapter... cant wait for the next chapter XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Survivei hope she doesnt regret it in the next chapter... cant wait for the next chapter XD
4/19/2011 c14 1Jevanminx
Despite the sad situation, that was beautiful scene between Devon and Rachel.
JM
1JevanminxDespite the sad situation, that was beautiful scene between Devon and Rachel.
JM
4/19/2011 c14 darkgurl92
omg...i hope they arrest the guy so everything would be back to normal.update soon..glad that devon is there for her, but just hope that when they wake up she wont regret it or blame devon.
omg...i hope they arrest the guy so everything would be back to normal.update soon..glad that devon is there for her, but just hope that when they wake up she wont regret it or blame devon.
4/14/2011 c13 lovebookz
I love this story but I can't believe what's about to happen to her
I hope he gets ther in time to save her...please update soon
I love this story but I can't believe what's about to happen to her
I hope he gets ther in time to save her...please update soon
4/13/2011 c13 CleverWriter2416
GAHH please tell me you're planning on updating soon! This story is fantastic! I want to know what happens next!
GAHH please tell me you're planning on updating soon! This story is fantastic! I want to know what happens next!
4/8/2011 c13 RockGuitar23
Seriously? You just had to stop it there? DANG IT!
Poor Rachel! The one time that she needs Devon's help, he's not around. And I want to know where the heck he was! Marvell really deserves to have his ass kicked (preferably by Devon) after this chapter. And I honestly hope that happens!
Extremely intense chapter! I know that you sort of gave me an early warning on twitter that something bad was going to happen, but at the end of this chapter, I was just like, "No way! She can't do this to Rachel!" Lol!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
~RockGuitar23
Seriously? You just had to stop it there? DANG IT!
Poor Rachel! The one time that she needs Devon's help, he's not around. And I want to know where the heck he was! Marvell really deserves to have his ass kicked (preferably by Devon) after this chapter. And I honestly hope that happens!
Extremely intense chapter! I know that you sort of gave me an early warning on twitter that something bad was going to happen, but at the end of this chapter, I was just like, "No way! She can't do this to Rachel!" Lol!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
~RockGuitar23
4/7/2011 c13 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
omg! you cant have being raped! she too awesome! update soon i cant wait to find out if someone comes and saves her XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Surviveomg! you cant have being raped! she too awesome! update soon i cant wait to find out if someone comes and saves her XD
4/6/2011 c13 HowlingWolf
Marvell is a deranged psychopath...but other than that, the story is amazingly awesome. It has a lot of potential and humor in it. And who actually knows what goes on in the FBI, besides the FBI? It really gets your imagination turning. Watch your grammar though. (I feel terrible for saying that!)
Marvell is a deranged psychopath...but other than that, the story is amazingly awesome. It has a lot of potential and humor in it. And who actually knows what goes on in the FBI, besides the FBI? It really gets your imagination turning. Watch your grammar though. (I feel terrible for saying that!)
4/5/2011 c13 11whisperedcares
YAY! I want more! I was wondering why I didn't now there were updates. Duh, I forgot to add you to my alerts^^ Dev better come and kick his ass, and then comfort Rachel. If he doesn't, I may have to kick his fictional ass-kus.
~Your Fairly New Avid Reader,
~Cara
11whisperedcaresYAY! I want more! I was wondering why I didn't now there were updates. Duh, I forgot to add you to my alerts^^ Dev better come and kick his ass, and then comfort Rachel. If he doesn't, I may have to kick his fictional ass-kus.
~Your Fairly New Avid Reader,
~Cara