for Stained With You4/5/2011 c13 
4Madame Jenn
Holy shitake muschrooms!
Ah, I can't believe they hung her out to dry like that.
Those boys have a lot of explaining to do...
Update soon!
4Madame JennHoly shitake muschrooms!
Ah, I can't believe they hung her out to dry like that.
Those boys have a lot of explaining to do...
Update soon!
4/5/2011 c13 D
Sad panda wants cliff hanger to go bye bye
Sad panda wants cliff hanger to go bye bye
4/5/2011 c13 3Sunlight's.Shadow
Just started reading the story and am in love with it! I can't help but love the love/hate stories... ahh and the drama in addition to Rachel and Devon as FBI agent- great plot :) but goodness, its just getting good and I really want to know what happens next! Devon better come save her!
... can't wait for the next update, keep up the good writing!
3Sunlight's.ShadowJust started reading the story and am in love with it! I can't help but love the love/hate stories... ahh and the drama in addition to Rachel and Devon as FBI agent- great plot :) but goodness, its just getting good and I really want to know what happens next! Devon better come save her!
... can't wait for the next update, keep up the good writing!
4/5/2011 c13 Aneesha
Hoot this is so intense!
Marvell is a fucking pig
But noo I hate cliffy's!
Update son!
Hoot this is so intense!
Marvell is a fucking pig
But noo I hate cliffy's!
Update son!
4/5/2011 c13 Witchy Mage
No! No no no no no no! Arrg. That's such an awful thing to have happen!
Now that the fluffiness has gone, it gets replaced with such a vile violating act by a distgusting creature!
Please do save her. I couldn't stand her being manhandled like that. Rachel is so much tougher than that! Why, oh, why did she drink? Team! Devon! Where are they at a time like this? But then again, it's your story to tell us how you like. :)
Thank you for the update and I look forward to a nicer resolution eventually.
No! No no no no no no! Arrg. That's such an awful thing to have happen!
Now that the fluffiness has gone, it gets replaced with such a vile violating act by a distgusting creature!
Please do save her. I couldn't stand her being manhandled like that. Rachel is so much tougher than that! Why, oh, why did she drink? Team! Devon! Where are they at a time like this? But then again, it's your story to tell us how you like. :)
Thank you for the update and I look forward to a nicer resolution eventually.
4/5/2011 c13 8castiel89
Fucking cliffhanger...
This chapter sucked. But not like "omg I hate it". No. Far from it. It sucks because it hurts to see Rachel put through that ordeal. I, honestly, felt her emotions. Her bravery for trying to stay cool in the situation, her anger at her team for not really heading her pleas and subsequently put in that spot, and finally the fear she felt when she realized she didn't have the means to fight back.
I wanna know where Devon was. Was he back up in the room trying to find out if the guys ha a clue to where Rachel was? Ugh. Are they just going to find Rachel lying unconscious in the stairwell?
So many questions you have left me with. Shame on you :P Just kidding. I hope this gets updated soon. You know I love me some Devon, and I cannot wait to see how he reacts to Rachel's rape. Probably feel a ta guilty, even though he warned her, and angry with the team an Marvell. Mm. A revenge seeking Devon screams sexy.
8castiel89Fucking cliffhanger...
This chapter sucked. But not like "omg I hate it". No. Far from it. It sucks because it hurts to see Rachel put through that ordeal. I, honestly, felt her emotions. Her bravery for trying to stay cool in the situation, her anger at her team for not really heading her pleas and subsequently put in that spot, and finally the fear she felt when she realized she didn't have the means to fight back.
I wanna know where Devon was. Was he back up in the room trying to find out if the guys ha a clue to where Rachel was? Ugh. Are they just going to find Rachel lying unconscious in the stairwell?
So many questions you have left me with. Shame on you :P Just kidding. I hope this gets updated soon. You know I love me some Devon, and I cannot wait to see how he reacts to Rachel's rape. Probably feel a ta guilty, even though he warned her, and angry with the team an Marvell. Mm. A revenge seeking Devon screams sexy.
3/30/2011 c12 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
why cant they just break that damn sexual tension already? haha, looking forward to the upcoming chaptrs update soon XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Survivewhy cant they just break that damn sexual tension already? haha, looking forward to the upcoming chaptrs update soon XD
3/25/2011 c12 Witchy Mage
Good things have to eventually come to an end, and that applies to this truce too. But I am loving it. It is so much fun to read the progression of their relationship. There wouldn't be much to write about if there weren't some problems.
Thank you for this update!
Oh, as for Marvell, I did forget about him (or at least his relevance in light of the development of the relationship)...
Good things have to eventually come to an end, and that applies to this truce too. But I am loving it. It is so much fun to read the progression of their relationship. There wouldn't be much to write about if there weren't some problems.
Thank you for this update!
Oh, as for Marvell, I did forget about him (or at least his relevance in light of the development of the relationship)...
3/22/2011 c9 Carlie
OMG I love this! I can't wait for more!
OMG I love this! I can't wait for more!
3/22/2011 c12 8castiel89
Dun dun dun... I feel something big's gonna happen soon. ;).
Fights between Dev and Rach equals sexual tension building. Which means they'll have to snap soon. :):)
8castiel89Dun dun dun... I feel something big's gonna happen soon. ;).
Fights between Dev and Rach equals sexual tension building. Which means they'll have to snap soon. :):)
3/22/2011 c12 InOthrWords
Something about a terrorist or something?
Isn't that why Rachel shot that one dude?
Something about a terrorist or something?
Isn't that why Rachel shot that one dude?
3/21/2011 c12 Bubbly Girl
Yay! You updated! :) I am super excited for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
Yay! You updated! :) I am super excited for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl