for Stained With You1/11/2011 c9 Bubbly Girl
I really hope that you get the next chapter up soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
I really hope that you get the next chapter up soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
11/15/2010 c9 amelia
update soon! :D
update soon! :D
11/6/2010 c9 
8castiel89
If she didn't really want him in her bed, I'm sure she would have kicked him out, or made more of a fuss. Maybe him there is a comfort to her. She knows he's safe and not dead somewhere, and he can keep HER safe from creeps like Marvell.
But, it would definitely piss me off if the guy I was "married" to was out banging another girl.
Love the A/N ;) So. True.
Finish Mae's wedding! Then get back to NaNo *scurries back to doc*
8castiel89If she didn't really want him in her bed, I'm sure she would have kicked him out, or made more of a fuss. Maybe him there is a comfort to her. She knows he's safe and not dead somewhere, and he can keep HER safe from creeps like Marvell.
But, it would definitely piss me off if the guy I was "married" to was out banging another girl.
Love the A/N ;) So. True.
Finish Mae's wedding! Then get back to NaNo *scurries back to doc*
11/5/2010 c9 Witchy Mage
A lot happened, but at the same time, not much happened. At least we met Marvell.
Poor Rachel. Not a great night for her.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
A lot happened, but at the same time, not much happened. At least we met Marvell.
Poor Rachel. Not a great night for her.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
11/5/2010 c9 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
aw hes so sweet with that end line :D i cant wait for the update please update soon XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Surviveaw hes so sweet with that end line :D i cant wait for the update please update soon XD
11/5/2010 c9 12All Over You
Oh the drama. Rachel was a bit... intense in this chapter, but eh. I still like her.
12All Over YouOh the drama. Rachel was a bit... intense in this chapter, but eh. I still like her.
11/2/2010 c8 Witchy Mage
It's getting exciting! I'm so curious as to how this is going to work out! Forget that, what's going to go down in this party? Rachel and Devon are so hot together.
I look forward to the next chapter!
It's getting exciting! I'm so curious as to how this is going to work out! Forget that, what's going to go down in this party? Rachel and Devon are so hot together.
I look forward to the next chapter!
11/1/2010 c8 Aneesha
Haha the elevator scene was good ;D
I enjoyed this chapter.
Update again soon plz
Haha the elevator scene was good ;D
I enjoyed this chapter.
Update again soon plz
11/1/2010 c8 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
awesome, it feels like forever since i have read this story and i still love it :D, update soon XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Surviveawesome, it feels like forever since i have read this story and i still love it :D, update soon XD
11/1/2010 c8 undiscovered92
FINALLY YOU UPDATED!
I've been waiting for this for a while all though I have to admit I was a bit lost at the beginning forgetting who is who etc.
Please keep posting it would mean a lot i'm sure to a lot of people. I know I still want you to finish it.
good luck :)
FINALLY YOU UPDATED!
I've been waiting for this for a while all though I have to admit I was a bit lost at the beginning forgetting who is who etc.
Please keep posting it would mean a lot i'm sure to a lot of people. I know I still want you to finish it.
good luck :)
10/31/2010 c8 8castiel89
Yeah, few typos here and there. But now I want you to say "Screw homework. Let's write the next chapter!" :)
Hmm.. Maybe the next chapter Rachel is waiting back in the hotel room for Devon, worried about him, and when he finally walks into the room and she jumps his bones! HAHAHA ;) ;)
Should I get sick so you can get out another chapter? LOL.
And yes, you persuasive wench! I will vouch for you that you suckered me into doing NaNoWriMo. Which starts in just over 45 minutes here. Then I can officially start writing!
8castiel89Yeah, few typos here and there. But now I want you to say "Screw homework. Let's write the next chapter!" :)
Hmm.. Maybe the next chapter Rachel is waiting back in the hotel room for Devon, worried about him, and when he finally walks into the room and she jumps his bones! HAHAHA ;) ;)
Should I get sick so you can get out another chapter? LOL.
And yes, you persuasive wench! I will vouch for you that you suckered me into doing NaNoWriMo. Which starts in just over 45 minutes here. Then I can officially start writing!
8/26/2010 c7 Guest
Bahahaha. Oh Devon's going to have quite the night at the party... The dress, having to play married (although secretly enjoy touching her) and all that jazz.
Yeah. Write more pwease :)
Bahahaha. Oh Devon's going to have quite the night at the party... The dress, having to play married (although secretly enjoy touching her) and all that jazz.
Yeah. Write more pwease :)