for Stained With You7/23/2009 c5 
12All Over You
i hope you update this one soon :] i'm really enjoying it. haha. rachel kicks ass.
12All Over Youi hope you update this one soon :] i'm really enjoying it. haha. rachel kicks ass.
6/23/2009 c5 genesis james
hey im loving this story.. the bickering between rachel and devon is so intense and i cant wait to see what you have planned for them :)and the entire fbi gang, they all bring something to the story and i cant wait to read more!
please update soon!
oh and btw, in chapter 4 it says "rachel shot marvell", but it's supposed to be mcarthy.
hey im loving this story.. the bickering between rachel and devon is so intense and i cant wait to see what you have planned for them :)and the entire fbi gang, they all bring something to the story and i cant wait to read more!
please update soon!
oh and btw, in chapter 4 it says "rachel shot marvell", but it's supposed to be mcarthy.
6/2/2009 c5 47oNjA
What the ? I can't believe he really did kiss her! Such a fantastic chapter...I totally and utterely cannot wait to read more!
47oNjAWhat the ? I can't believe he really did kiss her! Such a fantastic chapter...I totally and utterely cannot wait to read more!
6/2/2009 c5 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
i found this story and i love it, its mint, please update soon i cant wait tosee what happens later on in the story XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Survivei found this story and i love it, its mint, please update soon i cant wait tosee what happens later on in the story XD
6/1/2009 c5 Aneesha
hey omg all i have to say is 'FANTASTIC!' i just wish Devon and Rachel would get together already! lol but the chapter was great! thanks for writing = )
hey omg all i have to say is 'FANTASTIC!' i just wish Devon and Rachel would get together already! lol but the chapter was great! thanks for writing = )
6/1/2009 c5 Anonymous
I love this. Rachel and Devon have such a fun relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love this. Rachel and Devon have such a fun relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter.
4/10/2009 c4 1violet-eyez
where did the ring come from? is her dad anyway involved in this? and why did they actually have to get married?
1violet-eyezwhere did the ring come from? is her dad anyway involved in this? and why did they actually have to get married?
4/3/2009 c4 MireMoor
WOOHOO! GO RACHEL! Smack her again! Haha! I'm so glad I could help. I loved her reaction at the ring (it would have been mine as well). If you need anymore help at all, I'll be here ^_^ And I can't wait for the next chappy!
WOOHOO! GO RACHEL! Smack her again! Haha! I'm so glad I could help. I loved her reaction at the ring (it would have been mine as well). If you need anymore help at all, I'll be here ^_^ And I can't wait for the next chappy!
4/3/2009 c4 47oNjA
I wouldn't have slapped the poor waitress like that, but b*tch diserved it! That was hilarious! Can't wait for more!
~bbyluv
47oNjAI wouldn't have slapped the poor waitress like that, but b*tch diserved it! That was hilarious! Can't wait for more!
~bbyluv
4/2/2009 c1 Aneesha
hey i really enjoyed this first chapter could you please write more your doing an awesome job! i was just wondering when you are posting the next chapter, just out of curiosity? lol = )
hey i really enjoyed this first chapter could you please write more your doing an awesome job! i was just wondering when you are posting the next chapter, just out of curiosity? lol = )
4/2/2009 c3 17Lindsey Quit Lollygagging
Wow, so in all honesty, this story is great. I was sad when i went to click the next chapter and there wasnt one...lol. an update would be amamzing! :)
17Lindsey Quit LollygaggingWow, so in all honesty, this story is great. I was sad when i went to click the next chapter and there wasnt one...lol. an update would be amamzing! :)