for i loved you first3/10/2009 c1 
13ChaseRedMoon
You misspelled were ha ha! Just so you know though, it's full of awesome. I really like this poem it is so cute! I love Arca and Phi... don't ever think that I didn't. It was really cute. keep up the poems!
13ChaseRedMoonYou misspelled were ha ha! Just so you know though, it's full of awesome. I really like this poem it is so cute! I love Arca and Phi... don't ever think that I didn't. It was really cute. keep up the poems!
3/10/2009 c1 17sunday night sky
'which is what the roof to my house does
it shields me and protects against rain'
i dont like these lines because they dont fit, however i LOVE LOVE LOVE the rest of this poem. its so beautifully cute and wonderful. its so lovely. when i read the stanza about the fruit, i wasn't sure what you were getting at, at first, and i didnt really like it, until the last line... which was cute and i understood :) hehe. nice. love it!
17sunday night sky'which is what the roof to my house does
it shields me and protects against rain'
i dont like these lines because they dont fit, however i LOVE LOVE LOVE the rest of this poem. its so beautifully cute and wonderful. its so lovely. when i read the stanza about the fruit, i wasn't sure what you were getting at, at first, and i didnt really like it, until the last line... which was cute and i understood :) hehe. nice. love it!