for The Step brother3/15/2009 c2 Dahlie
I just gotta say,
i love...naw...adore this story.
woah.^^
just please keep writing, im begging on my knees, if u want me to.xD
the idea of the story ist just that hot, and i already love trevor^^
just please, write more xD
and dont u ever think of not finishing the story, yeah?
:)
kisses
I just gotta say,
i love...naw...adore this story.
woah.^^
just please keep writing, im begging on my knees, if u want me to.xD
the idea of the story ist just that hot, and i already love trevor^^
just please, write more xD
and dont u ever think of not finishing the story, yeah?
:)
kisses
3/15/2009 c2 
1Julia Nathan
Ha Ben and Jerry!
Okay I'm a bit confused of who's who so could you tell m the stepbrothers and there ages again? Bill is her father right? Good job! :)
1Julia NathanHa Ben and Jerry!
Okay I'm a bit confused of who's who so could you tell m the stepbrothers and there ages again? Bill is her father right? Good job! :)
3/15/2009 c2 she-who-will-not-be-named
i think that the idea for this story is really good.
its cool so far, maybe a little fast but it seems like it could be realy good :]
keep going. ;]
i think that the idea for this story is really good.
its cool so far, maybe a little fast but it seems like it could be realy good :]
keep going. ;]
3/10/2009 c1 Michelle
I loved it .
HAHA,
SOrry .
GIMME BACK THAT FILET-Oh FISh!
HAHA .
Loved it.
HAHA,
UDPATE SOON [:
I loved it .
HAHA,
SOrry .
GIMME BACK THAT FILET-Oh FISh!
HAHA .
Loved it.
HAHA,
UDPATE SOON [:
3/10/2009 c1 62Averybarbarian
I think it is quite interesting... Good character development and discription is nice too. I think you should keep writing I've very much enjoyed this chapter. =) Well done!
62AverybarbarianI think it is quite interesting... Good character development and discription is nice too. I think you should keep writing I've very much enjoyed this chapter. =) Well done!