for Litter Bug3/11/2009 c1 
49Pinkamoo
Haha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out.
I like this very much; it was tres cute!
49PinkamooHaha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out.
I like this very much; it was tres cute!
3/11/2009 c1 4slee5133
lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus!
4slee5133lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus!
3/10/2009 c1 NoieD
My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like!
My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like!
3/10/2009 c1 monkyy109
i love your bus series thing
theyre so awesome!
i think this is my favorite soo far...
cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D
i love reena's character shes so fun
and i like all of them lols i like ted
and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols
cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho
and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots
i love your bus series thing
theyre so awesome!
i think this is my favorite soo far...
cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D
i love reena's character shes so fun
and i like all of them lols i like ted
and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols
cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho
and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots
3/10/2009 c1 5amezz
That was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:)
5amezzThat was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:)
3/10/2009 c1 13blurrylights
That was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job!
13blurrylightsThat was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job!
3/10/2009 c1 charm en route
Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [:
Although I found a couple of mistakes:
"her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent
"like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager'
'"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that.
Anyway, great job.
Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [:
Although I found a couple of mistakes:
"her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent
"like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager'
'"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that.
Anyway, great job.