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3/11/2009 c1 49Pinkamoo
Haha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out.

I like this very much; it was tres cute!
3/11/2009 c1 4slee5133
lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus!
3/10/2009 c1 1Izzey
wonderful. loved it. it's light and fun. fantastic job!
3/10/2009 c1 NoieD
My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like!
3/10/2009 c1 5I Murder on Impulse
Hahaha so cute!

3/10/2009 c1 monkyy109
i love your bus series thing

theyre so awesome!

i think this is my favorite soo far...

cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D

i love reena's character shes so fun

and i like all of them lols i like ted

and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols

cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho

and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots
3/10/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
so cute! love it. :)

3/10/2009 c1 cheleigh
aww this is sweet. i love it =)
3/10/2009 c1 5amezz
That was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:)
3/10/2009 c1 13blurrylights
That was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job!
3/10/2009 c1 charm en route
Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [:

Although I found a couple of mistakes:

"her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent

"like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager'

'"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that.

Anyway, great job.
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