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Gonna go down omg Shannon best not win
Gonna go down omg Shannon best not win
3/21/2012 c12 animegirl214
Awww~ hahah Dominick is so nice~ 333
and final chapter as in THE FINAL? the END? :O
hhaha
thanks so much for this chapter! :)
Awww~ hahah Dominick is so nice~ 333
and final chapter as in THE FINAL? the END? :O
hhaha
thanks so much for this chapter! :)
3/18/2012 c11 animegirl214
Awwwwww! 333333
You go girl! hahaha
thanks for this chapter! Update again soon! Please! 333
Awwwwww! 333333
You go girl! hahaha
thanks for this chapter! Update again soon! Please! 333
3/16/2012 c11 
10A Different Kind of Yellow
Yay! You updated. I have been waiting a long time for this, so thank you very much! I hope Lucy is ok and her parents realise that it is time for their child to be happy! Please continue soon!
10A Different Kind of YellowYay! You updated. I have been waiting a long time for this, so thank you very much! I hope Lucy is ok and her parents realise that it is time for their child to be happy! Please continue soon!
3/16/2012 c11 Alixermixer
I feel so bad for Lucy but when you are pushed to that point sometimes you have to take action and everyone may not like it. I love this chapter. Please update more soon!
I feel so bad for Lucy but when you are pushed to that point sometimes you have to take action and everyone may not like it. I love this chapter. Please update more soon!
5/23/2011 c9 A Different Kind of Yellow
Hello! Loving this story but when are you going to continue it?
Hello! Loving this story but when are you going to continue it?
3/17/2011 c9 Alixermixer
Shannon is a hot mess. At least she didn't do anything else more damaging to the girl. Hopefully you will come back and finish this for your faithful readers.
Shannon is a hot mess. At least she didn't do anything else more damaging to the girl. Hopefully you will come back and finish this for your faithful readers.
11/11/2010 c9 7gulistala
I feel like the love proclamations are a little rushed, the general story line is a little rushed. I feel that Lucy, or anyone for that matter, wouldn't be instantly trusting of someone else enough for them to go shopping with and have them pick out an outfit to wear somewhere important. The characters also speak of Dominick's old spoilt behaviour but how did it change in one night? Or was he already changing before he 'met' (Hah! More like ravished!=D) Lucy?
Perhaps this is all just how I feel, but some of these don't seem credible. But other than these points, me likey! Very much!
Can't wait till the next chappie!
7gulistalaI feel like the love proclamations are a little rushed, the general story line is a little rushed. I feel that Lucy, or anyone for that matter, wouldn't be instantly trusting of someone else enough for them to go shopping with and have them pick out an outfit to wear somewhere important. The characters also speak of Dominick's old spoilt behaviour but how did it change in one night? Or was he already changing before he 'met' (Hah! More like ravished!=D) Lucy?
Perhaps this is all just how I feel, but some of these don't seem credible. But other than these points, me likey! Very much!
Can't wait till the next chappie!
11/11/2010 c7 gulistala
I'm really liking this story but I can't help but notice that every girl has blonde hair and all of them (except for Lucy) have blue eyes. Lucy, Miranda, Shannon, the girl Travis was cheating with...The guys have a slight bit more variety but not all that much...I don't know, it seems a little mary sueish/cliched when most female characters are blonde and blue eyed. I know appearance doesn't matter as much but it's sticking out a little.
All that aside I can't wait to see what secrets and drama await! Onto the next chappie! ^_^
I'm really liking this story but I can't help but notice that every girl has blonde hair and all of them (except for Lucy) have blue eyes. Lucy, Miranda, Shannon, the girl Travis was cheating with...The guys have a slight bit more variety but not all that much...I don't know, it seems a little mary sueish/cliched when most female characters are blonde and blue eyed. I know appearance doesn't matter as much but it's sticking out a little.
All that aside I can't wait to see what secrets and drama await! Onto the next chappie! ^_^
11/6/2010 c9 applenica
thank you thank you finally you update it. i miss your story. how lucy don't realize that dom loves her? at least dom's mother like lucy. please update soon ^^
thank you thank you finally you update it. i miss your story. how lucy don't realize that dom loves her? at least dom's mother like lucy. please update soon ^^
7/22/2010 c8 Ellybeth
Awesome story so far. I noticed you haven't updated in a long time and I wondered if you were going to? Thanks.
Awesome story so far. I noticed you haven't updated in a long time and I wondered if you were going to? Thanks.