for Memory5/31/2010 c1 
83Silver XIII
In the immortal words of.. I can't really remember her first said it. *Cough*
"Life goes by too fast for you to waste any time."
The poem's got a clear message. Anything you enjoy or look forward to will seem to take a long time to happen, and when it does it seem to end too quickly in comparison.
83Silver XIIIIn the immortal words of.. I can't really remember her first said it. *Cough*
"Life goes by too fast for you to waste any time."
The poem's got a clear message. Anything you enjoy or look forward to will seem to take a long time to happen, and when it does it seem to end too quickly in comparison.
12/22/2009 c1 32moving in stillness
Wonderful! I can hear the bells in my head. The imagery was beautiful, and though I'm not one for rhymes, I found your poem amazing.
32moving in stillnessWonderful! I can hear the bells in my head. The imagery was beautiful, and though I'm not one for rhymes, I found your poem amazing.
4/28/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I really enjoyed those last two verses, very, very, true.
I liked the imagry of the bell - not just the imagery, but also the the sounds of bells. Well done.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI really enjoyed those last two verses, very, very, true.
I liked the imagry of the bell - not just the imagery, but also the the sounds of bells. Well done.
Much love,
Juliet.
3/14/2009 c1 37rhymemaker
you have captured the feeling inside you and shared it beautifully. well-done.
37rhymemakeryou have captured the feeling inside you and shared it beautifully. well-done.