8/31/2021 c9 Guest
It’s been almost 11 years and I still hope you come back to this one day :’(
It’s been almost 11 years and I still hope you come back to this one day :’(
7/11/2020 c1 4Killer of MarySues
I read this back when I was in high school likec10 years ago. Kinda bummed it was never finished, it's a great read.
I read this back when I was in high school likec10 years ago. Kinda bummed it was never finished, it's a great read.
6/21/2020 c9 MsMellowMint
Came back to read this after a decade. Still love it! I wish it was still being updated, you’re a hilarious writer. My boyfriend and best friend are both brown so it’s especially great reading how relatable this is. So rare to read Asian fiction. Fingers crossed that you’ll return to this someday.
Came back to read this after a decade. Still love it! I wish it was still being updated, you’re a hilarious writer. My boyfriend and best friend are both brown so it’s especially great reading how relatable this is. So rare to read Asian fiction. Fingers crossed that you’ll return to this someday.
3/27/2020 c9 the.stupendous.flying.squirrel
I still hope you finish this one day. It's so fun and interesting, and unique in this little fictionpress world. Ten years later and I still can't forget it. Ah well, I'll follow this just in case.
I still hope you finish this one day. It's so fun and interesting, and unique in this little fictionpress world. Ten years later and I still can't forget it. Ah well, I'll follow this just in case.
4/28/2018 c9 Corazon De Piedra Verde
Oh my god! It is a shame that this isn't finished, this history is A- MA -ZING. I'm dying to know what it's next. Thank you for sharing it :)))))
Oh my god! It is a shame that this isn't finished, this history is A- MA -ZING. I'm dying to know what it's next. Thank you for sharing it :)))))
2/17/2018 c9 jia
why did you leave this story?!
i love your work
and more than that i want this story finished es[ecut yeah..
UPDATE PLEASE!
balkay COMPLLETE IT PLEASEE
-Paki-indi-culture-lover-high-on-your-nerdy-whacky-writing :D
why did you leave this story?!
i love your work
and more than that i want this story finished es[ecut yeah..
UPDATE PLEASE!
balkay COMPLLETE IT PLEASEE
-Paki-indi-culture-lover-high-on-your-nerdy-whacky-writing :D
1/31/2018 c6 Guest
How can that girl be Lebanese when her uncle Mr Khalil is Pakistani? You wrote that her mom is his sister.
How can that girl be Lebanese when her uncle Mr Khalil is Pakistani? You wrote that her mom is his sister.
12/14/2016 c9 Guest
I'm sad you're probably not going to continue this. I loved both this story and its prequel hiring a hooligan. Sorry someone plagiarized your awesome shit, sucks balls man. I'll just have to imagine a super banging ending where Spencer gets fully dumped and Navleen gets to be with Lucan. Or not, idk. Bangin story, I laughed really hard at parts. All your characters were fab and well rounded. Thanks for putting into words oral sex advice. Love and appreciate you.
I'm sad you're probably not going to continue this. I loved both this story and its prequel hiring a hooligan. Sorry someone plagiarized your awesome shit, sucks balls man. I'll just have to imagine a super banging ending where Spencer gets fully dumped and Navleen gets to be with Lucan. Or not, idk. Bangin story, I laughed really hard at parts. All your characters were fab and well rounded. Thanks for putting into words oral sex advice. Love and appreciate you.
11/13/2016 c9 Guest
Daaaamn, this story's unbelievably hot. I know you haven't updated this in six years, but I remembered enjoying this all those years ago. On this reread, it's still as awesome as I remember it being! I hope you'll get published someday - reading about Asian characters and different cultures is brilliant.
Daaaamn, this story's unbelievably hot. I know you haven't updated this in six years, but I remembered enjoying this all those years ago. On this reread, it's still as awesome as I remember it being! I hope you'll get published someday - reading about Asian characters and different cultures is brilliant.
9/13/2016 c9 K
Oh my gosh, NO... Why did I do that to myself? I knew you hadn't finished this but after reading the Hiring a Hooligin story I just wanted to read more in your unique writing style. I know you aren't coming back to this after 6 years but I hope you've continued writing in some form or other because you are fantastic.
I half contemplated adding you on Facebook to continue reading things in your hilarious voice but thought that seemed a little too creepy.
Damn, this is such a bummer to not know how it ends.
Oh my gosh, NO... Why did I do that to myself? I knew you hadn't finished this but after reading the Hiring a Hooligin story I just wanted to read more in your unique writing style. I know you aren't coming back to this after 6 years but I hope you've continued writing in some form or other because you are fantastic.
I half contemplated adding you on Facebook to continue reading things in your hilarious voice but thought that seemed a little too creepy.
Damn, this is such a bummer to not know how it ends.
5/10/2016 c9 browneyedcolly
6 years later and I'm still here, loyal and ready, waiting for this steamy steamy chapter.
6 years later and I'm still here, loyal and ready, waiting for this steamy steamy chapter.
12/30/2015 c6 2Xliaf27
I like Navleen's character. This story is much more easy to read than Hiring a Hooligan. But i like both stories anyway. And mostly, I LOVE LUCAN, 'coz I imagine him as "Trafalgar Law", one of my favorite anime character that's why i adore Lucan the first when he was described in HAH. Their physical description matched perfectly aside from their personality though. But all in all, I love this fic.
I like Navleen's character. This story is much more easy to read than Hiring a Hooligan. But i like both stories anyway. And mostly, I LOVE LUCAN, 'coz I imagine him as "Trafalgar Law", one of my favorite anime character that's why i adore Lucan the first when he was described in HAH. Their physical description matched perfectly aside from their personality though. But all in all, I love this fic.