7/2/2011 c9 8maiff
Dear Deena,
You're so awesome. Please, pretty please, update. I'm dying to know what happens next. :3
Dear Deena,
You're so awesome. Please, pretty please, update. I'm dying to know what happens next. :3
6/27/2011 c9 natalie-b
I've read this story so many times, I've lost count already, but it's always a hoot and never fails to make me laugh out loud! Love the characters and storyline... Can't decide who to like most though: Lucan (hot!), Navleen (hilarious!) or her mom (totally adorable!). Please update soon!
I've read this story so many times, I've lost count already, but it's always a hoot and never fails to make me laugh out loud! Love the characters and storyline... Can't decide who to like most though: Lucan (hot!), Navleen (hilarious!) or her mom (totally adorable!). Please update soon!
6/27/2011 c1 letsdancewhilethiscityburns
Hahahhah Its so much fun reading stories with Indian words in them:D Im half Indian so its fun talking in urdu to people who dont understand it:D
Hahahhah Its so much fun reading stories with Indian words in them:D Im half Indian so its fun talking in urdu to people who dont understand it:D
6/24/2011 c9 Dee
Update! Update, damn you! You can't just leave me hanging like this! Its about to get really good - their going to his place! My trampy self wants to read it very much so.
I love this so much. Probably because I can relate, what with being Indian and all.
Its been a while since we've heard from you. Much love if you could update soon.
Update! Update, damn you! You can't just leave me hanging like this! Its about to get really good - their going to his place! My trampy self wants to read it very much so.
I love this so much. Probably because I can relate, what with being Indian and all.
Its been a while since we've heard from you. Much love if you could update soon.
6/22/2011 c9 Are.theee
Hi,
I've just reread this entire story. I'd forgotten how much I like it! Please update soon,
A Loyal Reader.
Hi,
I've just reread this entire story. I'd forgotten how much I like it! Please update soon,
A Loyal Reader.
6/10/2011 c9 Elishar
Okay. I've been meaning to write this story a sensible and pleasant review, but after reading Chapter 9 about Nav dancing drunk and horny with the Filipino nursing students, I can't help but comment on the 'fuck you' in Tagalog part. But really I laughed so hard when I read that part I almost fell right off from my bed. Huney, 'putang ina mo' is more of 'motherfucker' because 'ina' is the Tagalog word of 'mother'. How'd you know about that anyway?
This story is hilarious and I shall give my praises to the genius writer for not making the characters emotionally dramatic and unbelievably perfect. They have flaws and appear to be real. I like that. Update soon, pakiusap.
Okay. I've been meaning to write this story a sensible and pleasant review, but after reading Chapter 9 about Nav dancing drunk and horny with the Filipino nursing students, I can't help but comment on the 'fuck you' in Tagalog part. But really I laughed so hard when I read that part I almost fell right off from my bed. Huney, 'putang ina mo' is more of 'motherfucker' because 'ina' is the Tagalog word of 'mother'. How'd you know about that anyway?
This story is hilarious and I shall give my praises to the genius writer for not making the characters emotionally dramatic and unbelievably perfect. They have flaws and appear to be real. I like that. Update soon, pakiusap.
6/6/2011 c2 Adhishree
Okay, so I just HAD to read this story because 1. It consists of a HOT ITALIAN BOY WITH TATTOOS. And he's a musician. WIN.
2. She's Indian! That's cool, [I'm Indian, and I live in Bombay] I haven't seen a single story about an Indian protagonist, so that certainly caught my eye.
Wasn't expecting such a huge first chapter, but it's definitely a good thing, 'cause when the story's gripping [this one IS!] you just want the chapters to get longer and longer, and more detailed. If I make sense.
I think the characters are great, so far. Her mom seems SUPER chilled out! Is your mom anything like that? But I think her English is a little over the top, considering the things she says, and her pronunciations.
Navleen's kinda cool, I can't help but imagine myself in her place, 'cause like, who wouldn't wanna get with a hot italian musician boy? So yes. I'm gonna picture myself as her.
Okay, long ass review. But I DO hope you update this, because even though I just finished Chapter 1, it says you haven't updated in a year.
PRETTY PLEASE? With Gulab Jamun on top? Haha.
x
Okay, so I just HAD to read this story because 1. It consists of a HOT ITALIAN BOY WITH TATTOOS. And he's a musician. WIN.
2. She's Indian! That's cool, [I'm Indian, and I live in Bombay] I haven't seen a single story about an Indian protagonist, so that certainly caught my eye.
Wasn't expecting such a huge first chapter, but it's definitely a good thing, 'cause when the story's gripping [this one IS!] you just want the chapters to get longer and longer, and more detailed. If I make sense.
I think the characters are great, so far. Her mom seems SUPER chilled out! Is your mom anything like that? But I think her English is a little over the top, considering the things she says, and her pronunciations.
Navleen's kinda cool, I can't help but imagine myself in her place, 'cause like, who wouldn't wanna get with a hot italian musician boy? So yes. I'm gonna picture myself as her.
Okay, long ass review. But I DO hope you update this, because even though I just finished Chapter 1, it says you haven't updated in a year.
PRETTY PLEASE? With Gulab Jamun on top? Haha.
x
6/4/2011 c9 ColorfulWorld
AHHHHHH! Such a good story you must update again pretty pleasssssssse with cherries on top!
AHHHHHH! Such a good story you must update again pretty pleasssssssse with cherries on top!
6/3/2011 c2 TheLike
This is incredible! It's been so long since I've started reading a really good story on here! I've actually had my eye on this gem for about a year now, but never got around to it because it hadn't been updated in a long time so I didn't want to go through the agony of waiting for ages for an update, but I couldn't help myself. I'm very happy with my decision, if you wanted to know.
This is incredible! It's been so long since I've started reading a really good story on here! I've actually had my eye on this gem for about a year now, but never got around to it because it hadn't been updated in a long time so I didn't want to go through the agony of waiting for ages for an update, but I couldn't help myself. I'm very happy with my decision, if you wanted to know.
5/26/2011 c9 8Shade the Viridescent
. . .Aw, bugger. I was getting so into this! I was loving it, the characters are so awesome, and the change from typical virginal-blushing-white-girl is great! And then. . .I reached the most recent update. Frantically, I scrolled up to check the date, hoping it was at least this year, and swore.
D: Please update? This is honestly one of the best stories I've read.
Regardless of whether you update sooner or later (but please don't say "never"!), this is totally awesome, a la AVPM. :D
Thanks for writing this awesomeness, chica! It was thermonuclear! XD
~Latni-chan~
. . .Aw, bugger. I was getting so into this! I was loving it, the characters are so awesome, and the change from typical virginal-blushing-white-girl is great! And then. . .I reached the most recent update. Frantically, I scrolled up to check the date, hoping it was at least this year, and swore.
D: Please update? This is honestly one of the best stories I've read.
Regardless of whether you update sooner or later (but please don't say "never"!), this is totally awesome, a la AVPM. :D
Thanks for writing this awesomeness, chica! It was thermonuclear! XD
~Latni-chan~
5/26/2011 c9 3A Dreamer Always
9 chapters of pure awesomeness XD I love it, and can't wait for more! Update soon, please :)
9 chapters of pure awesomeness XD I love it, and can't wait for more! Update soon, please :)
5/24/2011 c9 Alysha
I think this is my third time posting. And i'm gonna say the same thing i did the last two times: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i have the link of this story on my bookmark bar as the first one! i always visit time to time and experience disappointment! pleeeeasseee upppdaateee
I think this is my third time posting. And i'm gonna say the same thing i did the last two times: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i have the link of this story on my bookmark bar as the first one! i always visit time to time and experience disappointment! pleeeeasseee upppdaateee
5/20/2011 c9 2i am makulit
Oh Christ all mighty. I don't know why it's taken me so long to read this story when I knew you were the one to write. God knows I've been waiting forever for you to finish Hiring a Hooligan and fuck did I just absofuckinglutely love that story. You are an unbelievably amazing writer and your humor is slightly more than perfect. So different from typical romcom cliches, despite me always reading them. Seriously though. You have some good shit up your sleeves. I fucking love it.
Also, I'm Filipino, albeit not majoring in nursing, but I cracked up so hard for the Filipino nurses. I love your story. I really do.
Can't wait for you next hilarious update!
Oh Christ all mighty. I don't know why it's taken me so long to read this story when I knew you were the one to write. God knows I've been waiting forever for you to finish Hiring a Hooligan and fuck did I just absofuckinglutely love that story. You are an unbelievably amazing writer and your humor is slightly more than perfect. So different from typical romcom cliches, despite me always reading them. Seriously though. You have some good shit up your sleeves. I fucking love it.
Also, I'm Filipino, albeit not majoring in nursing, but I cracked up so hard for the Filipino nurses. I love your story. I really do.
Can't wait for you next hilarious update!