4/5/2009 c3 Frozen.by.Sloth
stupendous!

God damn, I love this!

Can't wait for more, you're doing a great job. Lol, I'm feeling really, really, REALLY sorry for Lucan and her right about now. :)

4/4/2009 c3 7adlerose
man, that was AWESOME!

i fell for lucan back in hooligan...

and now im just head over heels for him-again and again...

also ive always have high respects for indian beauties...

ive been reading a lot of stories with great idian characters...im falling for india now too...

i love navleen's mom...i want more of her...

all your characters are just so good...

i want to meet them all for real...you're that great...

4/4/2009 c3 bobbychu
This story is hillarious! Its funny how your writing seemed to mature with the older characters. I'm enjoying this story mucho. The indian humor is probably the best part because its so true. Indian movies are pure entertainment. =] I'm really enjoying Lucan's story! Kepp up the good work.

4/4/2009 c3 9Lyssa O
Goodness Grief almighty, give me some hot-hot Navleen&Lucan action any day and I'm fried butter! Seriously, their interactions are just so . . . flaming with hot desire that I'm always constantly on the edge of my seat waiting for one to jump the other. Or both jump at the same time. Darn it all to Hades that they should be interrupted so many times! I guess wishing for something between those two is kinda early, considering it's the third chapter and all, but jeeze louises you're giving your readers some very strong hope! I'm trying to be all professional and all at work with my strains of laughter, but my giddiness inside surely can't be contained.

You characters are all so lovely. That's probably a euphemism for calling them all the sh-ts, but I'm also not below calling them that, but ah, formalities of reviewing. They're foaming with hilarity, I just want to pocket them all and take them out for a good giggle when life gets to the point of strangling me with the mundane.

I loved the whole Dr. Fate thing; that's very clever and what better meeting place!

Oh, for your side author's note about Lucan crushing on Jane; it would've been great stuff if they DID end up together in HAH, but now that we've met Navleen, I think my partiality for Lucan's love life is bending towards Fate's Calling. You give Lucan and Navleen perfect chemistry!

Yay for another great chapter!

4/3/2009 c3 1Just Jane Doe
I am very much brimming with joy that you've created a story just for Lucan, really, my cup runneth over. Navleen seems like lots of fun and goodness I always do love the guardians you give for the main characters. Always a good chortle they are. Anyways, keep up the excellent work and may I be so bold as to ask if Janie will make any sort of cameo appearance in this?

4/3/2009 c3 2abc123 chewy
ah

i love it

i love it

i love it

i love it

i love it

i love it

IT IS AMAZING

and i truely love it.

i cannot wait for another update, can you tell?

4/3/2009 c3 Samantha Allison
Holy Crap! This is better then H.A.H.

:D

I'm in awe, the details and personalities you created for these characters is absolutely amazing. I have nothing bad to say about this story. A fantastic start and with each ending chapter I'm itching for more! Absolutely amazing!