3/21/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
this is so unique, i absolutely love it!
:D
Darren & Imogen... are complete and total awesome!
-toffeecakesxox.
this is so unique, i absolutely love it!
:D
Darren & Imogen... are complete and total awesome!
-toffeecakesxox.
3/14/2009 c1 3bloodyxnightmares
This story needs more detail. she comes to a new school meets one person... you didnt mention anyone else but him really... and then all of a sudden shes at a pool party. we dont even know what goes on at the pool party just that she drank to much and then screwed darren in the back of his car. then they go on a date... Time passes to quickly. you rushed through the story. we want to get to know this imogen and darren is better. the stories not bad at all. next time just add more detail.
This story needs more detail. she comes to a new school meets one person... you didnt mention anyone else but him really... and then all of a sudden shes at a pool party. we dont even know what goes on at the pool party just that she drank to much and then screwed darren in the back of his car. then they go on a date... Time passes to quickly. you rushed through the story. we want to get to know this imogen and darren is better. the stories not bad at all. next time just add more detail.
3/13/2009 c1 2Tawny4eva
Pretty good story! You should continue this. I think this is too good of a story for a one shot. You should add on to it!- Luv Sofie
Pretty good story! You should continue this. I think this is too good of a story for a one shot. You should add on to it!- Luv Sofie
3/13/2009 c1 1GoingSoloAtLast
Haha I dont mean to be very critical, but you got the name from the song My Life Would Suck Without You - Kelly Clarkson, eh?
Haha.
Good job on the writing btw.:)
Haha I dont mean to be very critical, but you got the name from the song My Life Would Suck Without You - Kelly Clarkson, eh?
Haha.
Good job on the writing btw.:)