for Heroes and Saints
6/30/2009 c1 
8SundownInteresting concept and well written. A few little awkward tenses kind of stick out eg. "His eyes lighted up" should be "his eyes lit up", but other than that I enjoyed reading this and hope you feel inspired to continue it at some point.
6/16/2009 c1 4chainmailthis is really good, it's not done is it?
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