for Crossing Enemy Lines6/8/2010 c9 CaitlinEA
So is this going to turn into a Romeo/Juliette thing between Ramon and Tati? Or is she staying with Mateo?
So is this going to turn into a Romeo/Juliette thing between Ramon and Tati? Or is she staying with Mateo?
11/29/2009 c9 
5RoseBriar32192
Ok 1. I'm not TOO surprised. 2. Things are adding up pretty well. 3. I'm on team Mateo! and 4. DUH! I loved this chapter! PLEASE update ASAP! - RoseBriar
5RoseBriar32192Ok 1. I'm not TOO surprised. 2. Things are adding up pretty well. 3. I'm on team Mateo! and 4. DUH! I loved this chapter! PLEASE update ASAP! - RoseBriar
11/27/2009 c9 18FreekyDisaster18
a) how did I not get e-mails telling me this story was being updated?
b) 0.o I'm so shocked at the twist of events. I want/need more!
Update soon, please!
18FreekyDisaster18a) how did I not get e-mails telling me this story was being updated?
b) 0.o I'm so shocked at the twist of events. I want/need more!
Update soon, please!
11/8/2009 c8 thefrogsareattacking
Confusion...6
Why? Cause her dad is in the Mafia or a competative toaster selling business.
I like Ramon, he seems nice.
She's gonna like it there better than at home? Don't know your the writer :P
Good story!
Confusion...6
Why? Cause her dad is in the Mafia or a competative toaster selling business.
I like Ramon, he seems nice.
She's gonna like it there better than at home? Don't know your the writer :P
Good story!
11/8/2009 c8 Joanna
1. i'm about a 6 on the scale, i can't really understand why someone would want her kidnapped. (guess that covers #2 too)
3. Ramon sounds like a nice guy roped into something he doesn't really wanna do. He sounds nice and caring, and sweet, and i'd say there was room for a potential romance between the two of them!
4. ... Not a clue!
All that said, I really can't wait to read more of this story, and i hope that you publish more soon! I'm really TRUELY enjoying, you have good skills as a writer!
1. i'm about a 6 on the scale, i can't really understand why someone would want her kidnapped. (guess that covers #2 too)
3. Ramon sounds like a nice guy roped into something he doesn't really wanna do. He sounds nice and caring, and sweet, and i'd say there was room for a potential romance between the two of them!
4. ... Not a clue!
All that said, I really can't wait to read more of this story, and i hope that you publish more soon! I'm really TRUELY enjoying, you have good skills as a writer!
11/4/2009 c8 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
LOL I love this chapter! I'm not exactly confused, Ramon's family is in some type of mob business or something right? That means that her family is too, but he decided to keep it a secret from her, to protect her in a way ^_^ Please update soon!
2XxSCENEandHEARDxXLOL I love this chapter! I'm not exactly confused, Ramon's family is in some type of mob business or something right? That means that her family is too, but he decided to keep it a secret from her, to protect her in a way ^_^ Please update soon!
11/3/2009 c8 1Imprisoned wit No Restrictions
answer and comments to your questions
1) i am mildly confused 5
2) cause i wanna know why she is getting kidnapped.
3) RAMON SEXY he sounds gorgous, like drop dead sexy gorgous... m damn girl
4) oky so daddy is a mexican american drug cartel and she dont know it... neither does momma dearest or if momma dearest does its her fault that her daughther got kidnapped. cause oky i finally got it momma spends drug cartel daddys money and her kidnappers think she knows something about it all right? i hope so
1Imprisoned wit No Restrictionsanswer and comments to your questions
1) i am mildly confused 5
2) cause i wanna know why she is getting kidnapped.
3) RAMON SEXY he sounds gorgous, like drop dead sexy gorgous... m damn girl
4) oky so daddy is a mexican american drug cartel and she dont know it... neither does momma dearest or if momma dearest does its her fault that her daughther got kidnapped. cause oky i finally got it momma spends drug cartel daddys money and her kidnappers think she knows something about it all right? i hope so
11/3/2009 c8 5RoseBriar32192
Ok I'm answering all your questions. One: On a scale of 1-10 I'm confused about a 3 or 4. Two: I'm confused as to why Ramon is nicer to her than the other guys. Three: Ramon's pretty awesome. He seems like he's going to try to help her out, cuz he really didn't want her kidnapped. Four: I'm guessing that he dad isn't really doing the job that she thinks he's doing. I'm also guessing that he's in a bit of a mess with these people. He might owe them money for example. Lastly, I think they kidnapped her to use as a ransom. ANYWAY this chapter came SUPPER fast and that made me excited! I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for another! - RoseBriar
5RoseBriar32192Ok I'm answering all your questions. One: On a scale of 1-10 I'm confused about a 3 or 4. Two: I'm confused as to why Ramon is nicer to her than the other guys. Three: Ramon's pretty awesome. He seems like he's going to try to help her out, cuz he really didn't want her kidnapped. Four: I'm guessing that he dad isn't really doing the job that she thinks he's doing. I'm also guessing that he's in a bit of a mess with these people. He might owe them money for example. Lastly, I think they kidnapped her to use as a ransom. ANYWAY this chapter came SUPPER fast and that made me excited! I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for another! - RoseBriar
11/3/2009 c8 HeyyyitsPickle
i am very confused that i think it will 10+...i have no idea why they kidnapped her...i think Ramon's nice...i think that those dudes kidnapped her cuz her dad owes them something
update soon :D
i am very confused that i think it will 10+...i have no idea why they kidnapped her...i think Ramon's nice...i think that those dudes kidnapped her cuz her dad owes them something
update soon :D
11/3/2009 c7 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
O.O I-i-it's a cliffie! NO! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chappie! ^_^
2XxSCENEandHEARDxXO.O I-i-it's a cliffie! NO! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chappie! ^_^
11/2/2009 c7 5RoseBriar32192
YAY! An update! I know some people like cliff hangers, but I am impatient so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
5RoseBriar32192YAY! An update! I know some people like cliff hangers, but I am impatient so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
11/2/2009 c1 RoseBriar32192
I think it should be a story. It took you SO long to update! I didn't think you were going to continue the story the way it was going! Ok, well, I know some people like cliff hangers, but I'm impatient, so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
I think it should be a story. It took you SO long to update! I didn't think you were going to continue the story the way it was going! Ok, well, I know some people like cliff hangers, but I'm impatient, so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
6/29/2009 c6 5RoseBriar32192
EEKK! Awesome chapter! I loved this one, I think her and Mat are going to start dating soon! I can feel it in my bones! UPDATE SOON OR IT WON'T BE A PRETTY SIGHT! - RoseBriar
5RoseBriar32192EEKK! Awesome chapter! I loved this one, I think her and Mat are going to start dating soon! I can feel it in my bones! UPDATE SOON OR IT WON'T BE A PRETTY SIGHT! - RoseBriar