for Bleeding1/7/2010 c1 Zia Mea
This is amazing. The lyrics are very thoughtful, and Little House is one of my favorite songs.
This is amazing. The lyrics are very thoughtful, and Little House is one of my favorite songs.
3/15/2009 c1 
9Mayo on toast
Hey. I like it, I really do. It's good, so don't tell yourself otherwise.
It's got a good rhyming scheme and intense, insightful content that paints a picture of someone searching for hope and makes me want to redouble my efforts to give it. Very moving poem, I thought.
Wow. I think that that is the longest review that I've ever given a poem before...
9Mayo on toastHey. I like it, I really do. It's good, so don't tell yourself otherwise.
It's got a good rhyming scheme and intense, insightful content that paints a picture of someone searching for hope and makes me want to redouble my efforts to give it. Very moving poem, I thought.
Wow. I think that that is the longest review that I've ever given a poem before...
3/15/2009 c1 Samuel Harrisson
I like how you put in a chorus, it was nice! As a suggestion though I wouldn't write "chorus" it's ok to be repetetive. Also this poem was a little too intense for me, but the one area I really liked was "Tell me you’ll hold me till it goes away.
Show me I’ll be here for another day."
It felt nice reading that one. But the poem in general was just a little too intense! Have a great day!
-Sam
I like how you put in a chorus, it was nice! As a suggestion though I wouldn't write "chorus" it's ok to be repetetive. Also this poem was a little too intense for me, but the one area I really liked was "Tell me you’ll hold me till it goes away.
Show me I’ll be here for another day."
It felt nice reading that one. But the poem in general was just a little too intense! Have a great day!
-Sam