for Welcome to Heartbreak9/16/2020 c31 JazzyCat67
Hey, I just wanted to let you know i just finished reading both of your complete stories. I love them so much, and am really wishing you got back into writing (or if you did just on a different platform please let me know!)
Hope life has been treating you well.
Hey, I just wanted to let you know i just finished reading both of your complete stories. I love them so much, and am really wishing you got back into writing (or if you did just on a different platform please let me know!)
Hope life has been treating you well.
10/8/2019 c31 Perpetua
I love the story, pls where can I read the sequel
I love the story, pls where can I read the sequel
8/18/2019 c16 OlawaleSmartboy200
cool
cool
7/10/2019 c19 Guest
No condom?
No condom?
7/9/2019 c18 Sweet
I read somewhere online that when you love 2 people at the same time, you should pick the second person because if you really loved the first person then you won't have fallen in love with the second
I read somewhere online that when you love 2 people at the same time, you should pick the second person because if you really loved the first person then you won't have fallen in love with the second
7/14/2018 c31 KWIN MIMI
Type your review here.I REALLY LUV DIS STORY AND IT IS VERY ROMANTIC
Type your review here.I REALLY LUV DIS STORY AND IT IS VERY ROMANTIC
7/9/2018 c27 Requiem
Has anyone else here realize that the protagonist is an antihero? She is basically facilitating adultery... and Rachel is the actual heroine... albeit she isnt mentioned much...
Has anyone else here realize that the protagonist is an antihero? She is basically facilitating adultery... and Rachel is the actual heroine... albeit she isnt mentioned much...
8/21/2017 c29 CocoBananas
Please don't take this as a hate comment or anything but I honestly feel like the two main characters were not realistic at all. The fact that you have made Eva so weak just goes to show that it's hard to see how she has changed as a person. I understand she's young and in love but shouldn't heartbreaks make a person stronger right after they've fallen? Eva could be much more than this and she shouldn't have gone to him so easily. Adam on the other hand was being very unrealistic. His morals were terrible and he should've broken it off with Rachel if he really loved her - another reason why Eva should have just left him. Once a cheater always a cheater - you've portrayed this character as a person who has his flaws and his goods but I don't understand what's so good about him for Eva to run back into his arms each time. Maybe you could make that more clear? But I guess if it wasn't for this I wouldn't have kept coming back to see the ending.
Please don't take this as a hate comment or anything but I honestly feel like the two main characters were not realistic at all. The fact that you have made Eva so weak just goes to show that it's hard to see how she has changed as a person. I understand she's young and in love but shouldn't heartbreaks make a person stronger right after they've fallen? Eva could be much more than this and she shouldn't have gone to him so easily. Adam on the other hand was being very unrealistic. His morals were terrible and he should've broken it off with Rachel if he really loved her - another reason why Eva should have just left him. Once a cheater always a cheater - you've portrayed this character as a person who has his flaws and his goods but I don't understand what's so good about him for Eva to run back into his arms each time. Maybe you could make that more clear? But I guess if it wasn't for this I wouldn't have kept coming back to see the ending.
3/24/2017 c1 Guest
Are you also in wattpad i read your story in wattpad.I think title is his maid.
Are you also in wattpad i read your story in wattpad.I think title is his maid.
11/20/2016 c5 Bookworm
Ok just some tips for consistency. Not sure if this is based in the US or not but med school comes after a 4 year university and takes 4 years. Unless Adam graduated high school and undergraduate school super early then he would be 26 upon graduating med school. Additionally, unless the Porsche is a 4 door there is no back seat. I've been in some and let's just say there is no way 3 people let alone one person would fit back there. I've been enjoying the story but I just wanted to let you know those things in case you ever do an edit.
Ok just some tips for consistency. Not sure if this is based in the US or not but med school comes after a 4 year university and takes 4 years. Unless Adam graduated high school and undergraduate school super early then he would be 26 upon graduating med school. Additionally, unless the Porsche is a 4 door there is no back seat. I've been in some and let's just say there is no way 3 people let alone one person would fit back there. I've been enjoying the story but I just wanted to let you know those things in case you ever do an edit.
6/29/2016 c15 SuckerForDelena
Fuck! He's going to ask Rachel to marry him on his dad's party isn't he? That's gonna be his gift! Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!
Can't they get together? Ugh!
Fuck! He's going to ask Rachel to marry him on his dad's party isn't he? That's gonna be his gift! Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!
Can't they get together? Ugh!
19/8/2015 c3 Guest
geez it's a nice story but the grammar makes it hard to read.
geez it's a nice story but the grammar makes it hard to read.
6/12/2015 c9 Nightjinx
I like this book quotes bit, mainly because of the story line , however is has a complete misconception of rich people...they aren't like that at all...
I like this book quotes bit, mainly because of the story line , however is has a complete misconception of rich people...they aren't like that at all...