for Flip3/26/2009 c1 
12Demented Hellion
I liked it. I don't really have much else to say about it. It was really good, the dialogue and description was balanced, the speed was just perfect, it wasn't drawn out or rushed, and it was just a good read. So good job!
12Demented HellionI liked it. I don't really have much else to say about it. It was really good, the dialogue and description was balanced, the speed was just perfect, it wasn't drawn out or rushed, and it was just a good read. So good job!
3/16/2009 c1 3Beast King
Oh, that was a great story. I liked the ending, it was kind of sweet and heartwarming, you know?
3Beast KingOh, that was a great story. I liked the ending, it was kind of sweet and heartwarming, you know?
3/15/2009 c1 Spazz-O-Spades
Wow Pyro! Yet another story that will go on my favorite list!
GOLF CLAPS!
*clappity clappity*
~Miki
Wow Pyro! Yet another story that will go on my favorite list!
GOLF CLAPS!
*clappity clappity*
~Miki
3/15/2009 c1 3Joseph Redfield
It was a fine short story. Good detailing and establishment of characters. Overall a good job. Keep up the good work
3Joseph RedfieldIt was a fine short story. Good detailing and establishment of characters. Overall a good job. Keep up the good work