for The Changelings of Syre5/30/2009 c9 
4Ck90
I loved it! is that really sophie? or is it giselle? Well anyway O'm glad she decided to stay! Happy Writing!
4Ck90I loved it! is that really sophie? or is it giselle? Well anyway O'm glad she decided to stay! Happy Writing!
5/30/2009 c8 xcrazyladyo
Interesting concept for a story. Do you mean that they are mates (stay together for their entire lifetimes?). I liked the first parts love story better, the second is a 'lil creepy with him kidnapping her and everything. Although, i find Sophie more real and likable than the first heroine.
I look forward to the rest of your story.
Interesting concept for a story. Do you mean that they are mates (stay together for their entire lifetimes?). I liked the first parts love story better, the second is a 'lil creepy with him kidnapping her and everything. Although, i find Sophie more real and likable than the first heroine.
I look forward to the rest of your story.
5/24/2009 c8 Ck90
Really can't wait for the next chapter! Is she a changeling as well? It seems so how else could she move with such grace and agility. Also I want to know what Sophie was thinking when he jumped from the window! Happy Writings!
Really can't wait for the next chapter! Is she a changeling as well? It seems so how else could she move with such grace and agility. Also I want to know what Sophie was thinking when he jumped from the window! Happy Writings!
5/20/2009 c8 Summer Leah
Wow . . . I really like this story! I'd love a hot, smexy scene next chapter!
Wow . . . I really like this story! I'd love a hot, smexy scene next chapter!
5/18/2009 c8 FunnyBusiness
Wow! This was an awesome chapter. The way Giselle is described was perfect. I could totally imagine that villainous siren sitting there, covered in berry juice. Also, Meirion's inner conflict here has defintely explained a few things about his charcter and at the same time, has added a whole new interesting facet to this story. Keep up the amazing writing and I'll keep my fingers crossed for an update.
Thanks,
~FunnyB
P.S. I love the Sophie-Meirion interactions in this story
P.P.S. I hope your favorite food isn't really "Friend Chicken". lol. My baby sister loves that book.
Wow! This was an awesome chapter. The way Giselle is described was perfect. I could totally imagine that villainous siren sitting there, covered in berry juice. Also, Meirion's inner conflict here has defintely explained a few things about his charcter and at the same time, has added a whole new interesting facet to this story. Keep up the amazing writing and I'll keep my fingers crossed for an update.
Thanks,
~FunnyB
P.S. I love the Sophie-Meirion interactions in this story
P.P.S. I hope your favorite food isn't really "Friend Chicken". lol. My baby sister loves that book.
5/17/2009 c8 hollowforest
Total page turner! Can't wiat to read more.
Total page turner! Can't wiat to read more.
5/17/2009 c8 11dreamercrys
Giselle is really really creepy... I hope that Meirion takes Sophie's chain off soon...
I love it! Can't wait to read more...
11dreamercrysGiselle is really really creepy... I hope that Meirion takes Sophie's chain off soon...
I love it! Can't wait to read more...
5/17/2009 c8 9Jennyt82
As requested a review, loved the chapter, hated Giselle, but i guess that's what you were aiming for so it's fine. I hope Meiron realises the error of locking poor Sophie away soon. She deserves better than to be left languishing in a tower. Update soon. =)
9Jennyt82As requested a review, loved the chapter, hated Giselle, but i guess that's what you were aiming for so it's fine. I hope Meiron realises the error of locking poor Sophie away soon. She deserves better than to be left languishing in a tower. Update soon. =)
5/15/2009 c8 4BloodyAutumnKisses
Wow, you have a great writing style that I find very engaging. I really wish you would turn these each into novels, not that you haven't done a great job in the short story area. The only issue I have is your editing, which seems to always have missing words in the sentences, incorrect viewpoints of he/she when either the male or female character is talking, and some rather odd word choices for the image you are trying to create. I don't have time really to find all of the exact occurrences of these, but it's something that I would watch. On the all and all though, you have a great idea here that I look forward to continuing on Sunday! Keep up the great work.
4BloodyAutumnKissesWow, you have a great writing style that I find very engaging. I really wish you would turn these each into novels, not that you haven't done a great job in the short story area. The only issue I have is your editing, which seems to always have missing words in the sentences, incorrect viewpoints of he/she when either the male or female character is talking, and some rather odd word choices for the image you are trying to create. I don't have time really to find all of the exact occurrences of these, but it's something that I would watch. On the all and all though, you have a great idea here that I look forward to continuing on Sunday! Keep up the great work.