2/22/2010 c18 20groundhog591
Ugh! I most definitely hate cliffhangers! :p Okay. Please update soon! I am begging you! I really really want to know what's going to happen! :D I saw this alert and I got so excited. I even jumped up and down. :) I really love this! Please please please update soon!
Ugh! I most definitely hate cliffhangers! :p Okay. Please update soon! I am begging you! I really really want to know what's going to happen! :D I saw this alert and I got so excited. I even jumped up and down. :) I really love this! Please please please update soon!
2/22/2010 c18 7MuseofMagic
Lmfao. Best fucking chapter ever. I think Saphiri is definitely my favorite character in the story - she's just fantastic all cunning and tricky.
Update again soon! You're right when you say I don't want to miss what happens next. I'm dying to find out.
~ Caiti
Lmfao. Best fucking chapter ever. I think Saphiri is definitely my favorite character in the story - she's just fantastic all cunning and tricky.
Update again soon! You're right when you say I don't want to miss what happens next. I'm dying to find out.
~ Caiti
2/22/2010 c18 Lovecupid
It would serve her right if Phavian kicked her butt out for humiliating him like that. Dying to find out what happens next.
It would serve her right if Phavian kicked her butt out for humiliating him like that. Dying to find out what happens next.
2/16/2010 c17 amelia
please update soon :-( I'd wait another year for your next update though. but please update soon! this is awesome
please update soon :-( I'd wait another year for your next update though. but please update soon! this is awesome
1/29/2010 c1 dutchess123
When are you going to update?
When are you going to update?
1/23/2010 c17 7MuseofMagic
How you managed to slip TWO chapters by me without my knowing is beyond me. I got the notice about chapter 17 going up, but not a single one about 15 or 16. I was quite irate when I started reading 17 only to realize two sentences in that it didn't follow the last thing I'd read. If it wasn't such a bother I'd definitely bitch to fictionpress about that little issue with lack of notifications. -tuts quietly to herself-
Anyway! I'm very pleased to see you've updated, I've been waiting for ages! Then of course when I get the notification I'm unable to find free time to read for over a month, but between Christmas with the family and going back to uni and a number of other things, it was to be expected. I've read it now and can I just say... I absolutely love Phavian and Saphiri already and this Vasya and bard seem like quite the interesting pair as well!
You've definitely got me on the edge of my seat, so update soon before I have to start making death threats and all other manners of unpleasant correspondence. Nobody wants that, trust me.
~ Caiti
How you managed to slip TWO chapters by me without my knowing is beyond me. I got the notice about chapter 17 going up, but not a single one about 15 or 16. I was quite irate when I started reading 17 only to realize two sentences in that it didn't follow the last thing I'd read. If it wasn't such a bother I'd definitely bitch to fictionpress about that little issue with lack of notifications. -tuts quietly to herself-
Anyway! I'm very pleased to see you've updated, I've been waiting for ages! Then of course when I get the notification I'm unable to find free time to read for over a month, but between Christmas with the family and going back to uni and a number of other things, it was to be expected. I've read it now and can I just say... I absolutely love Phavian and Saphiri already and this Vasya and bard seem like quite the interesting pair as well!
You've definitely got me on the edge of my seat, so update soon before I have to start making death threats and all other manners of unpleasant correspondence. Nobody wants that, trust me.
~ Caiti
12/31/2009 c10 Bookworm0912
This is like the best "M" rated story in romance in history! (Loud squeal)
This is like the best "M" rated story in romance in history! (Loud squeal)
12/29/2009 c17 6Rosetiger13
Well, it took me a while to read this but I finally got around to it!
Pretty good chapter, I understand the Colonel's view better now, thanks, for clearing it up a bit.
Update soon! And her cousin's story sounds interesting...next couple i'm guessing.
happy writing,
rosetiger13
xoxo
Well, it took me a while to read this but I finally got around to it!
Pretty good chapter, I understand the Colonel's view better now, thanks, for clearing it up a bit.
Update soon! And her cousin's story sounds interesting...next couple i'm guessing.
happy writing,
rosetiger13
xoxo
12/29/2009 c17 Mo- The Reviewer
I can't wait to see what her plan will end up!
Please UPDATE ASAP so I can FIND OUT!
~Mo~
I can't wait to see what her plan will end up!
Please UPDATE ASAP so I can FIND OUT!
~Mo~
12/28/2009 c17 dutchess123
I hope that the updates come faster but i can complain about the quality because your stories fassinate me! I think that the cousin falls for the other wyvner or whatever there called. I can't wait for the nexted chapter its hilarious how that girl is messing with the general. I love it!
I hope that the updates come faster but i can complain about the quality because your stories fassinate me! I think that the cousin falls for the other wyvner or whatever there called. I can't wait for the nexted chapter its hilarious how that girl is messing with the general. I love it!
12/24/2009 c17 roma
keep up the good work! glad to have an update during the holidays :)
keep up the good work! glad to have an update during the holidays :)