for Daisies in December6/13/2013 c1 displacedfemale
When I started reading this I was slightly unsure as to whether or not I'd finish, it was quite peculiar but I got into it towards the middle and found I had a smile on my face as I read the ending.
When I started reading this I was slightly unsure as to whether or not I'd finish, it was quite peculiar but I got into it towards the middle and found I had a smile on my face as I read the ending.
11/17/2012 c1 TamikaT
Aww, too cute! Very original story! I love it! Holly may need to be admitted, but Luke really doesn't seem too bad compared to the others. Like he said maybe Holly's love can heal him. Kudos!
Aww, too cute! Very original story! I love it! Holly may need to be admitted, but Luke really doesn't seem too bad compared to the others. Like he said maybe Holly's love can heal him. Kudos!
10/13/2012 c1 Bubbly Girl
A little weird but insanely adorabubble! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
A little weird but insanely adorabubble! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
9/1/2012 c1 
2loveofallthatisawesome
I find Luke to be absolutely adorable. His overreactions - his extreme hypochondria - are actually endearing, and when he stubbed his toe I simultaneously laughed and 'awwed'. He just seems like a really cool guy.
And I also really like Holly. I like how she's scared of him at first, but then she quickly becomes his friend, and the fact that he's in a mental institution doesn't even bother her.
I really hope they're soul mates and they end up together forever :D
2loveofallthatisawesomeI find Luke to be absolutely adorable. His overreactions - his extreme hypochondria - are actually endearing, and when he stubbed his toe I simultaneously laughed and 'awwed'. He just seems like a really cool guy.
And I also really like Holly. I like how she's scared of him at first, but then she quickly becomes his friend, and the fact that he's in a mental institution doesn't even bother her.
I really hope they're soul mates and they end up together forever :D
8/13/2012 c1 13youngin-matomon
It's a very good idea and I love the characters. You write simply but deliver your message perfectly well. I would have liked a bit more fleshing out of the characters and the institution, but other than that, it was a really nice read! Thanks.
13youngin-matomonIt's a very good idea and I love the characters. You write simply but deliver your message perfectly well. I would have liked a bit more fleshing out of the characters and the institution, but other than that, it was a really nice read! Thanks.
8/2/2012 c1 6Artiste007
You are all kinds of brilliant. Excuse me as I make my way through your brilliant works :D
6Artiste007You are all kinds of brilliant. Excuse me as I make my way through your brilliant works :D
4/17/2012 c1 1DuchessYappingDog
Cute, he kind of sounds like a girl instead of a guy, but it's still cute. :)
1DuchessYappingDogCute, he kind of sounds like a girl instead of a guy, but it's still cute. :)
4/4/2012 c1 3Thulia
Amazingly sweet. It felt so simple, clean and innocent that I couldn't help but love it plus it has that quirkey side to I'd being set around a mental institute aswell. I like how you didn't make it too crazy, but at the same time didn't have it exactly normal you struck a perfect balance. Tell you what though I would've loved it to be a novella or something longer instead of a one-shot; such an inertsting plot deserves a whole book.
BYExBYE
3ThuliaAmazingly sweet. It felt so simple, clean and innocent that I couldn't help but love it plus it has that quirkey side to I'd being set around a mental institute aswell. I like how you didn't make it too crazy, but at the same time didn't have it exactly normal you struck a perfect balance. Tell you what though I would've loved it to be a novella or something longer instead of a one-shot; such an inertsting plot deserves a whole book.
BYExBYE
1/29/2012 c1 3peacelovejay
This is the cutest story ever! Such a unique plot, really well written, just... ah, perfect!
3peacelovejayThis is the cutest story ever! Such a unique plot, really well written, just... ah, perfect!