
2/17/2016 c16 twenty-first day
I have been reading this story without reviewing and I just realized that there isn't any more. And the last update was in 2011. Please tell me that there is more. Please. There has to be more. I need to know what happens.
I have been reading this story without reviewing and I just realized that there isn't any more. And the last update was in 2011. Please tell me that there is more. Please. There has to be more. I need to know what happens.
3/8/2014 c16 UniCryin
I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
Please update fast :) I'm really interested in Devon'f "feral" side- what abilities will it have?
I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
Please update fast :) I'm really interested in Devon'f "feral" side- what abilities will it have?
2/3/2014 c16 Guest
Love loved it ... more plz
Love loved it ... more plz
5/9/2013 c16 dragonlilly1993
... this story is so amazing that I seriously never want it to end. This story is just an amazing peace of work all around, I cant even begin on what to say I love most. The characters, sex scenes :3, plot, pace of the story, the chapter lengths description, etc! I love it all! I would so buy this if you made it into a real book. I'm sad that this hasn't been updated in over a year :( I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO PLEASE UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!
... this story is so amazing that I seriously never want it to end. This story is just an amazing peace of work all around, I cant even begin on what to say I love most. The characters, sex scenes :3, plot, pace of the story, the chapter lengths description, etc! I love it all! I would so buy this if you made it into a real book. I'm sad that this hasn't been updated in over a year :( I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO PLEASE UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!
2/26/2013 c16
3morningstorm70
If I was a man I a hard on LOL
Just tell me this is not the end and you will be updating soon. It looks like it has been awhile since the last update

If I was a man I a hard on LOL
Just tell me this is not the end and you will be updating soon. It looks like it has been awhile since the last update
1/22/2013 c16 luc
The love scene is ok, but i am confused how can devon can be so strong and weak in the same time? i like devon be a hero for everyone, but please don't make kenba seem so weak...waiting for your updated...
The love scene is ok, but i am confused how can devon can be so strong and weak in the same time? i like devon be a hero for everyone, but please don't make kenba seem so weak...waiting for your updated...
5/12/2012 c10
3Sayure
I feel sorry for Devon he don't deserve what's happening to him, I want to kill Curtis and Kenba doesn't deserve a mate like that he late him alone never tried to talk to him

I feel sorry for Devon he don't deserve what's happening to him, I want to kill Curtis and Kenba doesn't deserve a mate like that he late him alone never tried to talk to him
5/10/2012 c2 Sayure
Forget the introduction, this chapter -even if I hate violence and more a cold stupid parents- is so more than good I give you 6 stars knowing there is only 5
Forget the introduction, this chapter -even if I hate violence and more a cold stupid parents- is so more than good I give you 6 stars knowing there is only 5