for Claws that Bind Me3/31/2009 c3 Revontulet Zvezda
very nice story so far, it´s quite interesting. please update soon "makes puppy eyes"
very nice story so far, it´s quite interesting. please update soon "makes puppy eyes"
3/31/2009 c3 Gwengwel
Thanks for this new chapter. Like that we have somme answer.
Devon have caracter loll.
Wait next chap. next week...
Gwen
Thanks for this new chapter. Like that we have somme answer.
Devon have caracter loll.
Wait next chap. next week...
Gwen
3/31/2009 c3 HazeleyedHoney
Its good to know some of the what Kenba's biting did to Devon, but the end was sad. I can't wait to see what you do next, especially with what the separation will do to both of them. Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.
Its good to know some of the what Kenba's biting did to Devon, but the end was sad. I can't wait to see what you do next, especially with what the separation will do to both of them. Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.
3/23/2009 c2 
6CrimsonLilly
Aw...what else is there to say to explain the feeling of this chapter? Kenba is so cute with his possessiveness and Devon is so adoringly confused by it all:)
"For you will soon be completely a part of me"-that can so be taken in more ways than one! And it only makes me go 'And? Then what happens?'
Can't wait for more!
And yeah you are mean for just ending it there.
But it's more fun this way and I personally adore cliffhangers(especially when I write them myself heh heh)
You're doing a great job here, keep it up!
6CrimsonLillyAw...what else is there to say to explain the feeling of this chapter? Kenba is so cute with his possessiveness and Devon is so adoringly confused by it all:)
"For you will soon be completely a part of me"-that can so be taken in more ways than one! And it only makes me go 'And? Then what happens?'
Can't wait for more!
And yeah you are mean for just ending it there.
But it's more fun this way and I personally adore cliffhangers(especially when I write them myself heh heh)
You're doing a great job here, keep it up!
3/23/2009 c1 CrimsonLilly
Oh wow. I know this story already has two chapters, but I just had to voice my thoughts on this one first! So hot would be the shortest way to go ;) In the longer version, I like how you managed to develop Devon for the most part in just one chapter and also the entire idea for this story is really well thought out. And having that cat guy just makes it all that better ^o^
Ok that should be that for the first chapter...
I think...
Oh wow. I know this story already has two chapters, but I just had to voice my thoughts on this one first! So hot would be the shortest way to go ;) In the longer version, I like how you managed to develop Devon for the most part in just one chapter and also the entire idea for this story is really well thought out. And having that cat guy just makes it all that better ^o^
Ok that should be that for the first chapter...
I think...
3/23/2009 c2 HazeleyedHoney
I really love your story! Especially the reference to Death Note. I hope Devon will begin to say no Kenba in the future, 'cause I prefer an uke like Misaki from Junjou Romantica, than one who can't say no and will do everything the seme wants. Update as soon as you can.
I really love your story! Especially the reference to Death Note. I hope Devon will begin to say no Kenba in the future, 'cause I prefer an uke like Misaki from Junjou Romantica, than one who can't say no and will do everything the seme wants. Update as soon as you can.
3/23/2009 c2 2The youngen
Very good and internesting story. I like your discriptions and Devon's character. I can't wait to read more!
2The youngenVery good and internesting story. I like your discriptions and Devon's character. I can't wait to read more!
3/23/2009 c2 Gwengwel
I don't hate you...if you update soon...very soon ok? loll
I'm not verry good to write story so i'm not in position to tell you what to do to improve this story. But...i read a lot and i know what i like and what i dislike and you're style, the story, the fluidity of the text, with all that I want to continue reading.
Gwengwel
P.s. i didn't know english until last year...forgive my errors.
I don't hate you...if you update soon...very soon ok? loll
I'm not verry good to write story so i'm not in position to tell you what to do to improve this story. But...i read a lot and i know what i like and what i dislike and you're style, the story, the fluidity of the text, with all that I want to continue reading.
Gwengwel
P.s. i didn't know english until last year...forgive my errors.
3/21/2009 c1 HazeleyedHoney
This is really good AND DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT STOPPING! I think most people will flame me for saying this, but I think David did Devon a favor. I know David should be thrown off a cliff for what he did, but it pushed Devon towards his dream. I still think David should be tied to a stake and burned for his crimes. The smex was really hot and I can't wait to find out who this cat-man is and how he's connected to Devon. Update as soon as you can.
HazeleyedHoney aka UsurpAuthority from MF
This is really good AND DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT STOPPING! I think most people will flame me for saying this, but I think David did Devon a favor. I know David should be thrown off a cliff for what he did, but it pushed Devon towards his dream. I still think David should be tied to a stake and burned for his crimes. The smex was really hot and I can't wait to find out who this cat-man is and how he's connected to Devon. Update as soon as you can.
HazeleyedHoney aka UsurpAuthority from MF
3/19/2009 c1 bluess0xs
GREAT! I'm hooked I loved the line about "get over it hicks"
Gr David ticked me off!
*holds bloody nose* oh boy!
GREAT! I'm hooked I loved the line about "get over it hicks"
Gr David ticked me off!
*holds bloody nose* oh boy!
3/18/2009 c1 Gwengwel
First to review!
Like this so far. Intriguing first chapter...i want to know what it is... so you better continue! please! i put you on "story alert" for now.
Gwen
First to review!
Like this so far. Intriguing first chapter...i want to know what it is... so you better continue! please! i put you on "story alert" for now.
Gwen