for Claws that Bind Me10/20/2011 c2 Kitty3
And this is only chappy 2! :)
And this is only chappy 2! :)
10/8/2011 c16 
6magnanimousSquirrel
I think the...scene was quite intense and alright for the situation. Kenba was obviously under a lot of stress..
I just KNEW there had to be something about him!
I like this story. :) Intense chapter. As was the last one.
6magnanimousSquirrelI think the...scene was quite intense and alright for the situation. Kenba was obviously under a lot of stress..
I just KNEW there had to be something about him!
I like this story. :) Intense chapter. As was the last one.
7/26/2011 c3 1Princess Teska
I just wanted to point out a small grammatical error for you :) In the second part (after the line), in the fifth paragraph, you have the sentence "Maybe I reminded him of my son?". I believe you meant to say "Maybe I reminded him of his son?", based on context. Aside from that, you're one of the better yaoi authors I've seen on this site :) Keep up the good work!
1Princess TeskaI just wanted to point out a small grammatical error for you :) In the second part (after the line), in the fifth paragraph, you have the sentence "Maybe I reminded him of my son?". I believe you meant to say "Maybe I reminded him of his son?", based on context. Aside from that, you're one of the better yaoi authors I've seen on this site :) Keep up the good work!
6/17/2011 c16 Slylove
Love, love, LOVE this story! Please update whenever you can!
Love, love, LOVE this story! Please update whenever you can!
5/13/2011 c2 Sasuki
Okay, just finished reading the fameux edited chapter one. I gotta say you really have put a lot of thought into all of this. You worked on your characters history which I believe gives depth, and mystery and somewhat of a hint hint factor. I can't really explain it clearly. I mean I've read this work quite entirely (and I say so with great pride), but can't really help but feel that there is something in this chapter that it going to spontaneously pop back up at the end. A prediction say or something along those lines.
Truth be told, I am not one who rereads works more than once (I have a good memory...sorta...) unless I recall a passage and a desire to scan it comes over me. While I was reading, my mind couldn't help but leap ahead and recall other passages. I pretty much ended up scanning the whole shabang all over again. It rarely happens. That gives you a huge one up over several works of literature that I've read.
Okay, just finished reading the fameux edited chapter one. I gotta say you really have put a lot of thought into all of this. You worked on your characters history which I believe gives depth, and mystery and somewhat of a hint hint factor. I can't really explain it clearly. I mean I've read this work quite entirely (and I say so with great pride), but can't really help but feel that there is something in this chapter that it going to spontaneously pop back up at the end. A prediction say or something along those lines.
Truth be told, I am not one who rereads works more than once (I have a good memory...sorta...) unless I recall a passage and a desire to scan it comes over me. While I was reading, my mind couldn't help but leap ahead and recall other passages. I pretty much ended up scanning the whole shabang all over again. It rarely happens. That gives you a huge one up over several works of literature that I've read.
5/12/2011 c1 Sasuki
Ah I wasn't expecting a prologue when you told me you were editing your work. Actually I thought you were talking about yourself until you mentioned that it was Devon. Than again I might have been reading way into it. Maybe. This part makes me think a little of Steven King's ideology of horror (mainly the start) and of his written articles. I found that quite interesting. Keep it up. Keep it up. I haven't had enough yet.
Ah I wasn't expecting a prologue when you told me you were editing your work. Actually I thought you were talking about yourself until you mentioned that it was Devon. Than again I might have been reading way into it. Maybe. This part makes me think a little of Steven King's ideology of horror (mainly the start) and of his written articles. I found that quite interesting. Keep it up. Keep it up. I haven't had enough yet.
5/5/2011 c16 corigray333
I love your charakter Devon. I hope you will let him kick teir asses.
Awesome story so far, I can't wait for more! Thank you.
I love your charakter Devon. I hope you will let him kick teir asses.
Awesome story so far, I can't wait for more! Thank you.
5/4/2011 c1 5Shikokudarkstar
I don't believe an intro to the story is nesscisary. The story is wonderful and can stand well on it's own. It's not bad, honestly, and I did like it. I just believe that the story flows better on it's own without the introduction.
5ShikokudarkstarI don't believe an intro to the story is nesscisary. The story is wonderful and can stand well on it's own. It's not bad, honestly, and I did like it. I just believe that the story flows better on it's own without the introduction.
5/4/2011 c16 Oni
Chapter 15 was great. 14 was awesome. Explain to me why it would have been wrong for him to rip Curtis' throat out. I am having issues that he walked away (crawled) alive after that encounter. Plus, it would simply be an act of kindness -better than letting Damien get to him.
Never make promises assuring long life or long marriage. Totally unpredictable. Tsk, tsk, tsk! Shame on Devon.
This story has come a long way from chapter one. I forgot how it all started because it has altered direction so much. I hope that you get to complete it. It sounds like you have 15 more chapters or so to go before you are close to an ending, judging from your comments. Hang in there and stick with it. You are doing a great job. Goodluck to you.
Chapter 15 was great. 14 was awesome. Explain to me why it would have been wrong for him to rip Curtis' throat out. I am having issues that he walked away (crawled) alive after that encounter. Plus, it would simply be an act of kindness -better than letting Damien get to him.
Never make promises assuring long life or long marriage. Totally unpredictable. Tsk, tsk, tsk! Shame on Devon.
This story has come a long way from chapter one. I forgot how it all started because it has altered direction so much. I hope that you get to complete it. It sounds like you have 15 more chapters or so to go before you are close to an ending, judging from your comments. Hang in there and stick with it. You are doing a great job. Goodluck to you.
4/27/2011 c16 heavensentskysky
i really love your story! update soon! cant wait to see what happens :)
i really love your story! update soon! cant wait to see what happens :)
4/23/2011 c16 3Dorchise
It might just be me, but I feel like I've already read this chapter? What happened? Did you just reload it, re-edited it, or am I just completely wrong?
3DorchiseIt might just be me, but I feel like I've already read this chapter? What happened? Did you just reload it, re-edited it, or am I just completely wrong?
3/13/2011 c15 2E. N. Chance
That was an amazing chapter! Who knew that Kenba had so much..testosterone and that Devon was such a vixen. Oh and by the way..."pain in the butt to write the love scene" haha ;P Can't wait for a new chapter, I'm dying to know why the triplets are acting out of character.
2E. N. ChanceThat was an amazing chapter! Who knew that Kenba had so much..testosterone and that Devon was such a vixen. Oh and by the way..."pain in the butt to write the love scene" haha ;P Can't wait for a new chapter, I'm dying to know why the triplets are acting out of character.