for Claws that Bind Me11/16/2010 c1 Carson Jean
oh my god i love it
is the strang man a snow leopard? i hope so that would be so cool
i must keep reading
oh my god i love it
is the strang man a snow leopard? i hope so that would be so cool
i must keep reading
10/30/2010 c10 Onikasam
Chapter 9 goes WAY overboard on EMO-istics! It was too corny. Curtis sucks rotten eggs, and I hope that Nancy is dating that angry girl who is always chumming around with Thomas. Would not mind seeing some 'happy' Thomas/Devon action. Then it would be funny to have Kenba beat the shit out of Thomas. Not kill him though.
Chapter 9 goes WAY overboard on EMO-istics! It was too corny. Curtis sucks rotten eggs, and I hope that Nancy is dating that angry girl who is always chumming around with Thomas. Would not mind seeing some 'happy' Thomas/Devon action. Then it would be funny to have Kenba beat the shit out of Thomas. Not kill him though.
10/26/2010 c1 Blue Devil012
That was so sexy and unique! I'm so glad I found this! I'm so curious to know what's going to happen now! :D You're writing is such a breath of fresh air :3
That was so sexy and unique! I'm so glad I found this! I'm so curious to know what's going to happen now! :D You're writing is such a breath of fresh air :3
10/24/2010 c1 Taylor
That was certainly... something. I think you had two errors though. It might be just me, I don't know. It might have been the sentence where it said: "Everything was set: bus ticket purchased, Lease signed and in my backpack as well as address to my new home, everything packed that I wanted, including my paint set." I don't know if lease was suppose to be capitalized or not. There was another one, but I totally forgot where it was!... Ah! Found it! Okay, I think you should have put a 'to' between stairs and my: "Not wanting to deal with any crazy people who would dare walk around without any shoes, I unlocked the front door to my building and pulled it shut, without looking to see who it was and started my trek up the six flights of stairs to my floor." I could be the one mistaken, I liked it though! Of course, I would NEVER be like those parents. The only reason I would cry is if he had to hide for so long and be afraid to tell me what he was. (I would already drop hints to my children though that I was a fan girl. ^-^) Again, it was good. Well done. *claps*
That was certainly... something. I think you had two errors though. It might be just me, I don't know. It might have been the sentence where it said: "Everything was set: bus ticket purchased, Lease signed and in my backpack as well as address to my new home, everything packed that I wanted, including my paint set." I don't know if lease was suppose to be capitalized or not. There was another one, but I totally forgot where it was!... Ah! Found it! Okay, I think you should have put a 'to' between stairs and my: "Not wanting to deal with any crazy people who would dare walk around without any shoes, I unlocked the front door to my building and pulled it shut, without looking to see who it was and started my trek up the six flights of stairs to my floor." I could be the one mistaken, I liked it though! Of course, I would NEVER be like those parents. The only reason I would cry is if he had to hide for so long and be afraid to tell me what he was. (I would already drop hints to my children though that I was a fan girl. ^-^) Again, it was good. Well done. *claps*
9/21/2010 c14 HazeleyedHoney
Sorry it took so long for me to read this chapter...work you know? I'VE GOT SO MANY FIC PRESS STORIES TO CATCH UP ON! You've no idea. Back to the review:
It was a little weird reading this chapter. Not that it was a bad thing...Don't get me wrong...But it was like Devon was drunk or high and what he was experiencing was totally different than what everyone else was experiencing. He wanted to rip out Curtis' throat, but you never read about him actually doing it and then it's all of a sudden done? He smells death, but is Curtis actually dead? No? Trippy.
I can't wait to see how you tie him, Brookes, and Isabella together. If they are related...that would mean Devon and Milo are related?
Sorry it took so long for me to read this chapter...work you know? I'VE GOT SO MANY FIC PRESS STORIES TO CATCH UP ON! You've no idea. Back to the review:
It was a little weird reading this chapter. Not that it was a bad thing...Don't get me wrong...But it was like Devon was drunk or high and what he was experiencing was totally different than what everyone else was experiencing. He wanted to rip out Curtis' throat, but you never read about him actually doing it and then it's all of a sudden done? He smells death, but is Curtis actually dead? No? Trippy.
I can't wait to see how you tie him, Brookes, and Isabella together. If they are related...that would mean Devon and Milo are related?
9/5/2010 c14 Sasuki
Damn good stuff. Good stuff. I had so much fun reading this chapter. It flowed so well and read so easily. I see you've been working harder on your structure and order of events as though to prevent any confusion? Possibly? Maybe? Just a guess.
I'd hardly say that the story itself is becoming a soap opera. First off, it's too gory (loving the gore..I mean LOVING IT) and secondly it has an animeish vibe to it. I don't know how to explain it properly, but it's like a mixture of various characteristics from serveral animes, movies and even books. That's how I see it. It's like you took the ideas of various people worked on each one to improve them and combined everything to something utterly glorious, and unique. GENIUSNES!
Honestly, I found the ending of the chapter a little cliche, but meh it could use a little cliche. Damion is quite the...euh interesting character. Can't wait to meet Brooks!
Keep at it doll.
Sasuki Imouto
Damn good stuff. Good stuff. I had so much fun reading this chapter. It flowed so well and read so easily. I see you've been working harder on your structure and order of events as though to prevent any confusion? Possibly? Maybe? Just a guess.
I'd hardly say that the story itself is becoming a soap opera. First off, it's too gory (loving the gore..I mean LOVING IT) and secondly it has an animeish vibe to it. I don't know how to explain it properly, but it's like a mixture of various characteristics from serveral animes, movies and even books. That's how I see it. It's like you took the ideas of various people worked on each one to improve them and combined everything to something utterly glorious, and unique. GENIUSNES!
Honestly, I found the ending of the chapter a little cliche, but meh it could use a little cliche. Damion is quite the...euh interesting character. Can't wait to meet Brooks!
Keep at it doll.
Sasuki Imouto
8/31/2010 c14 
1The-Angel-Illusion
Definitely a dun dun dun ending. Wow. Totally 'Luke, I am your father.' Wow. Awesome chapter. Update soon, please! I'm begging you! I need to know what happens next...
1The-Angel-IllusionDefinitely a dun dun dun ending. Wow. Totally 'Luke, I am your father.' Wow. Awesome chapter. Update soon, please! I'm begging you! I need to know what happens next...
8/31/2010 c13 jmr79au
i think this was the best written chapter so far. There were not so many gramatic errors and it flowed so beautifully. It didn't make me confused with too much information. And no, it is not too early to re-introduce Isabella to the story. Keep up the great work.
i think this was the best written chapter so far. There were not so many gramatic errors and it flowed so beautifully. It didn't make me confused with too much information. And no, it is not too early to re-introduce Isabella to the story. Keep up the great work.
8/28/2010 c14 Revontulet Zvezda
woah, this chapter was so fucking freaky. the zombie wolf was so fucking gross. How exactly did Isabella brought him back from the dead?
woah, this chapter was so fucking freaky. the zombie wolf was so fucking gross. How exactly did Isabella brought him back from the dead?
8/28/2010 c14 3Stormshower084
Okay, amazing. I know I'm not very important because u have several other reviewers that u care about more than this one, but this story is amazing and I can't wait for the update.
3Stormshower084Okay, amazing. I know I'm not very important because u have several other reviewers that u care about more than this one, but this story is amazing and I can't wait for the update.
8/28/2010 c14 1Raiya-shi
Dun dun dun indeedy... I thought it would be more of a power trait than anything since he is able to block her... wonder if he could extend that protection to people near him... if the pack thinks the same as Kenba though, trusts might fall again and there might be issues... gah! lol anyways thanks for the update... sorry about the classes .
1Raiya-shiDun dun dun indeedy... I thought it would be more of a power trait than anything since he is able to block her... wonder if he could extend that protection to people near him... if the pack thinks the same as Kenba though, trusts might fall again and there might be issues... gah! lol anyways thanks for the update... sorry about the classes .
8/28/2010 c14 17JtheChosen1
Wow...just wow lol.
Incredible here as usual! And the ending, man that was great!
17JtheChosen1Wow...just wow lol.
Incredible here as usual! And the ending, man that was great!