
8/29/2012 c3
1Kayla5254
Its a really awesome story. But im finding it a bit hard to read, as some of it dont make sence.

Its a really awesome story. But im finding it a bit hard to read, as some of it dont make sence.
1/9/2011 c11 The Nerdy Nerd
Great story or fanfiction or whatever you call it.
It's just 2 problems. 1. Why is this M rated?(not counting chapter 9) 2. There is a lot of misspelling here.
However I don't get it, were does this take place? Is it in Blood harvest or Death tool?
But as I said, great story,keep up with it and ... nothing more to say.
Great story or fanfiction or whatever you call it.
It's just 2 problems. 1. Why is this M rated?(not counting chapter 9) 2. There is a lot of misspelling here.
However I don't get it, were does this take place? Is it in Blood harvest or Death tool?
But as I said, great story,keep up with it and ... nothing more to say.