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9/14/2009 c1 24Mistress of Eternity
You've captured innocence and frailty and gentleness in so little.

School has my mind and my hands bound to its beds, so I find no time or drive to write, but your work stirs some nostalgia in me. Mayhap...


4/25/2009 c1 46kyox88
nice one~~how touching~
4/9/2009 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh, that is so sad. But yes, this took me back, with those seats and all the fun times, slouched down with your male best friend so people assume you're getting kinky because they can't see the two of you. Yeah. Definitely some bittersweet memories there. Very nicely said. Keep writing! :)
3/18/2009 c1 she smolders
I know this so well and you've captured the innocence at that age and the regret one always feels now ao well. The story you tell here is honest in a way that aches.

Take care.

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