for Carbon Copy3/19/2009 c1 
41MyNameIsDave
It is good. Although, it does read more like a poem. If you took time to turn this poem into a song, I bet it would be a good song. For the song, you just need some rhyming, timing, and style scheme (verses, chorus, etc.). Probs should put this in with the other poems..
41MyNameIsDaveIt is good. Although, it does read more like a poem. If you took time to turn this poem into a song, I bet it would be a good song. For the song, you just need some rhyming, timing, and style scheme (verses, chorus, etc.). Probs should put this in with the other poems..